A Paradise Story I made, will put it on the shifti later... finished it a couple of days ago, only put it up now. I loved this concept and had to try it out.... It isn't the story I originally envisioned (because I wasn't sure how to write the story I originally envisioned), but I think it's pretty good on its own merits.

This is in the Paradise Story setting and may not make sense if you don't know how the setting works. Consider this your warning, if you wish to know. Go to http://shifti.org/wiki/Category:Paradise you'll be glad that you did, it's not a bad setting at all. Plus one of the best writers I've ever had the privelage of knowing  MatthiasZebra has written 9 stories for the series that I heavily reccomend checking out

Future Stories of mine to look forward to
Metamor Keep - Tales Of The Transblade Part 1
Paradise Perspectives Part 1 - Weird Girly Boy