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Fun stuff! I think I should have described the towns and buildings a bit more, but... it may be unimportant at this time since they're only seen for a few moments.
Poor Zach. I actually feel really bad for him here. I've always known this scene was going to be put in here, but I never really thought about it in detail until I wrote it. :(
Ed may also have acted too cool and calm in this scene... maybe... He made people nervous, so it works.
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Poor Zach. I actually feel really bad for him here. I've always known this scene was going to be put in here, but I never really thought about it in detail until I wrote it. :(
Ed may also have acted too cool and calm in this scene... maybe... He made people nervous, so it works.
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Category Story / Fantasy
Species Bat
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 12.3 kB
Ohh, Eds on the move and creating a mess.
Great chapter here 8-)
Otherwise, just a few typos and one of them is kinda funny.
Going to drop the lines they are in for you here. Feel free to hide this post at anytime too.
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...Tonight was also their one year anneversary and Zach wanted to make it a very special night...
...Nicole was waiting for hi inside the enormous west gate made of one foot thick logs...
...Nicole reached pu and wrapped her arms around Zach's neck. She kissed him on the nose and said, "Ready."...
...As he spoke, he began to descend to a clear hell much like the usual spot with the exception...
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Great chapter here 8-)
Otherwise, just a few typos and one of them is kinda funny.
Going to drop the lines they are in for you here. Feel free to hide this post at anytime too.
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...Tonight was also their one year anneversary and Zach wanted to make it a very special night...
...Nicole was waiting for hi inside the enormous west gate made of one foot thick logs...
...Nicole reached pu and wrapped her arms around Zach's neck. She kissed him on the nose and said, "Ready."...
...As he spoke, he began to descend to a clear hell much like the usual spot with the exception...
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