Heya! A little delayed, but I was looking to read this eventually and just say whatever, if anything in particular, I had to say.
Just got done with it. :)

Quite the ride, I'd say. It certainly could be interesting to see how things would continue from here, if you were looking to do more with it eventually. Perhaps it might feel a little "all over the place," but at the same time it needs to be kept in mind that this is just one bit of what might become something fairly sizeable if you keep at it.
And besides, given some of the stuff I mentioned as potential inspiration material, I suppose this breadth of wackiness is however-much of the point. XD

I wouldn't have gained the benefits of the P.P. because I eat the crust because I HAVE SOME CLASS.
*ahem*

Anyways, best of luck to you on this if you continue with it. I'm sure you'll hit your stride with it more as you go on, not to mention if you continue taking in more "comedic pirate stuff" to potentially inspire things. :)

Take care!

Better late than never, as the saying goes.

Well, current plans are gonna take a dark sudden left turn to discussing... I'll talk about it on FF. But basically it's another character introduction before the main course begins. As for how chaotic it might turn out, the first two parts are simply getting eased into the world and fun adventure, then three through five is when it hits the fan. I will be placing subtle hints throughout so that when part three happens it doesn't feel like something I pulled out of nowhere.
Yes, yes it is.

Facts, I too am a crust lover (at least when it's not the burnt crispy kind that it's hard to chew on) especially for deep dish (hence why it would be tempting) but given the circumstances to this pizza, it would be best to pass it up.

Thanks, Wulfe, it means a lot.

Well that was one wacky adventure! Perhaps he should be more mindful of where he gets his drinks from, yes?

Perhaps, but then again, he's a pirate. Besides, it seems that the bartender's attempt didn't result in the desired effect so I'd say, he's in a decent place if he wants to keep having such dreams.

Thanks for reading Dead, it means a lot.

That was fun, and I enjoyed the little easter eggs, well the ones I caught anyway lol. Very comical start to the adventure!

By easter eggs do you mean the cameos? If there's more, I'm curious because that would mean I did something unwittingly.

Yes, comical... It gonna be a mix of that and other things.

Thanks for reading and the commentary, Shelby, it means a lot.

Just the fun little tidbits and stuff, like "don't call me Shirley"

Ah, I know what you mean and yes, those were fun moments.

That epilogue! It was like a great Cartoon Network cartoon of old. Loved it.

Haha. Glad you enjoyed it Lu, thanks for reading.