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You're in the Dandy Tooniverse, arriving at the Pearlescent Port by ship...
THEMES INDLUDED: Cartoon Flattening, Paws & Trampling, Tickling, Dread
Enjoy.
Proof-read with tremendous help from
Perdrewss and 
shiroshark1
THEMES INDLUDED: Cartoon Flattening, Paws & Trampling, Tickling, Dread
Enjoy.
Proof-read with tremendous help from
Perdrewss and 
shiroshark1
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Feline (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 23.4 kB
This was a very good and engaging read! Your description of surroundings, feelings, characters etc. really helped to transport me into this amazing world for a while. I also really like your use of 2nd person. I felt like I could insert my own OC into the story and have them experience the series of events!
Oh, this hits all the right buttons for me. Excellent blend of high fantasy and tooniness. You clearly understand the horror of being objectified and overlooked, but at the same time you're not so cruel as to let that fate be final. And getting rolled up is a favorite flattening trope of mine.
I'd love to see what else happens in this setting.
I'd love to see what else happens in this setting.
Not going to lie, I thought of your DeviantArt stories while writing the beginnings of this, remembering your focus on the minutia of movement and physicality. It was creepy!
Thank you, I'm delighted as an artist you enjoyed it.
And not so cruel as to let it be final, sure....
But like, the service charge is gonna be big, and this city ain't cheap. They've got systems for folks, hehe. Getting help is the start of an adventurer's worries on Leviathan's Throat.
Thank you, I'm delighted as an artist you enjoyed it.
And not so cruel as to let it be final, sure....
But like, the service charge is gonna be big, and this city ain't cheap. They've got systems for folks, hehe. Getting help is the start of an adventurer's worries on Leviathan's Throat.
Well, I have to thank you for this. I didn't even finish the story; yet I got so inspired by the sensational style that I'm now back on my bullcrap and writing again~
Look out, world. ;P
(Also yeah, the story described what it was like to be a flatty so very, very well. <3 )
Look out, world. ;P
(Also yeah, the story described what it was like to be a flatty so very, very well. <3 )
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