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so in my original draft, they ate dinner and talked about their day for like 4 more pages. it gave more expository details on their life, but as i worked on it, i realized its kinda way too early for that, so i cut it and reworked most of the dinner to a 1 page montage sorta deal, so we can get to a bit more cute dynamic building, followed by the plot actually kicking off.

also had to break the 180 rule to make the flow of the footsie panel make sense. the fact that i then flip back i hope translates as a sorta spinning wheel shot.

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