This is just beautiful baby, when you read it to me in bed i smiled big time- it truly is gorgeous!
I know jay will love it <3

ta gorgeous

:O Absolutely amazing~ I love it! <3 You've definitely got talent with words! ...Not that you didn't already know that, but ya know. :P

Okay so where do I send the monies?

Oh also, is it dollars or sterling?

Glad you like it simply to amma's paypal as I'm skint so can't set up my own yet lol. Its dollars as I already put five dollars and five sterling is nearly twice as much lol, I won't go overcharging!

thank you very much for my first paid commi

quite welcome, dude. It was well worth it. Keep up the good work. ;3

outstanding, man, i must say....i wish i was this talented with words, i really do, man xD

you've got a gift, my friend

thank you very much for your praise i dont know why i am and half the time i dont even feel i do as i think in such simple word most of the time but once i get a flow its really easy, easier than people think

it does get easier, once ya get in the flow of things, i will admit...as to writing off and on occasionally, i feel that flow of things, it's a good feeling lol. but still, poetry, i could never do. it's different than writing, to me...it's a hell of a lot harder...it's like the big leagues, when writing is the minors lol. but still man, i never have seen someone quite as artistic with words as you are, man

well i thank you very much, i guess it must be something to do with reading descriptive fantasy adventure books from a young age perhaps as nobody else in my family is any good at poetry lol.

hopefully you'll see alot more of my stuff on here in time

that's gotta be a good reason, man x3

yea, hopefully, i will see more of your stuff on here, man. it's damn good, i enjoy reading it cheers lol

Very nice.