Bunnification Rampage: Bunny Pinks!?
Part 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6076202/
Well, here we have the logical conclusion of firing two carrot rays at each other within close range. Bunnification to both targets.
But ya know. It's not all bad.
Me (left) and
koopusk (right) dun mind bunny forms every once in awhile! So it's all good! We can play bunny games or something! Whatever those games may be. It'll be fun!
But let's get one thing straight. Koopus, is pink. He's Bunny Pink! Me? I'm Magenta. Bunny Magenta! That's me! Dun call me Bunny Pink that's Koopus! And dun call Koopus Bunny Magenta! They are totally two different colors!
And see! In comparison to other people who are no logner tall (these are mini bun anthros after all) I dun look that short!
Guess that puts an end to the rampage for now though. I mean I ran out of colors.... And I am to distracted by my long ears to fumble with figuring out where the Carrot Rays went after the blast.
Well, here we have the logical conclusion of firing two carrot rays at each other within close range. Bunnification to both targets.
But ya know. It's not all bad.
Me (left) and
koopusk (right) dun mind bunny forms every once in awhile! So it's all good! We can play bunny games or something! Whatever those games may be. It'll be fun!But let's get one thing straight. Koopus, is pink. He's Bunny Pink! Me? I'm Magenta. Bunny Magenta! That's me! Dun call me Bunny Pink that's Koopus! And dun call Koopus Bunny Magenta! They are totally two different colors!
And see! In comparison to other people who are no logner tall (these are mini bun anthros after all) I dun look that short!
Guess that puts an end to the rampage for now though. I mean I ran out of colors.... And I am to distracted by my long ears to fumble with figuring out where the Carrot Rays went after the blast.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Transformation
Species Rabbit / Hare
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You're right in saying that it's not all bad (this is cute, whatever else I say). I'm trying to think of constructive criticism, which is hard because there's a lot of room to criticize and not sounding like a jerk by saying it presents difficulties of its own.
First, their legs. It seems that for the guy on the left, his right leg is longer because he has his paw upturned. Same for the left foot of the guy on the right.
Only other thing I can think of is that their torsos seem a little long.
First, their legs. It seems that for the guy on the left, his right leg is longer because he has his paw upturned. Same for the left foot of the guy on the right.
Only other thing I can think of is that their torsos seem a little long.
Ehhh I can take jerkyness. I am... fully aware of just how bad I am. I draw like a kindergartener.
Rather appropriate since my fursona is a kindergartener.
Without some advice no matter how much I try to draw stuff I'm not gonna get better, so criticism and advice is actually appreciated! *nod nod*
And I really need to find a tutorial or something to use for a guide for the proportions. :/
Rather appropriate since my fursona is a kindergartener.
Without some advice no matter how much I try to draw stuff I'm not gonna get better, so criticism and advice is actually appreciated! *nod nod*
And I really need to find a tutorial or something to use for a guide for the proportions. :/
Curses! And after I went through all that trouble to get the bunny ray! *blows long ears out of his face, looking grumpy*
*then Koopus's face breaks into a smile, he laughs and sticks out his tongue with a wink* Just kidding.
,,,And now we dance! *Irish riverdance music starts up*
It looks really good, Calex, your expressions are clear and readable. Nice work!
*then Koopus's face breaks into a smile, he laughs and sticks out his tongue with a wink* Just kidding.
,,,And now we dance! *Irish riverdance music starts up*
It looks really good, Calex, your expressions are clear and readable. Nice work!
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