Pretty doodle!

It doesn't look like crap to me! I wish I could draw muscles like that. Why don't you finish it?

I can't really see what's wrong with it honestly? Is it the angle?

O.o woh! Sac-shot!

o.O
Well....this is the first time we see you in...what the hell is that? A thong?
And perhaps you should try to finish it to see how it looks....though my mind is picking at me to say something about your pecs. As much muscle mags I look at, I never seen pecs split three ways like that. And I don't know, something about those pecs like that just doesn't seem right to me. Course I'm not an expert on how much larger muscles like that look.

lol, their briefs; just very stretched and with a big pouch xD

Ah! Okay, it's the way the sides were stretched that gave it that impression. And I hope my comment on your pecs was helpful.....if not, oh well.

lol his pecs are actually four so the lower ones look awkward at times; but instead of actually defining four pecs i just made his pecs bigger with the lower indentations and higher nipples :O

Oh....I..I got to admit, I don't like it. For some reason, when I look at them, I see a burgers with nipples between buns...or eyes, he's got a second pair of very large eyes on his chest.
Though I do wonder where did you come up with the idea of four pecs?
I'm sorry, I love your muscle structures and your artwork very much, but the pecs in this....it's just not you.

lol ill probably erase some of the lines anyways

Anatomy-wise, if he has four arms, then he'd need two sets of pecs and lats to help with their movement. It's a necessary anatomy thinger lol

In anatomy-wise, If that was true, then he would have a second set of pecs right underneath the first pair like this hot stud here.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/321072/
And frankly, it really doesn't matter as it all depends on how the artist sees and draws it. If he wants to have four arms with one set of pecs, he can draw it and it can work just like all those normal guys with hyper dicks that haven't died yet from all the lack of blood to the rest of the body.

arms seem too small for the body IMO

Whoa! O_o That's one loaded pair of undies.

I agree with 1dimensional. The arms do look a little small for the body.
So, you are forging a massive pectoral system instead of layering 2 sets of pecs? That is interesting.

Keep tinkering with it. You might end up liking it.

this is effing beautiful. i love the gesturing and the searching in this. seriously awesome.

dude, glad you like; i love your work as well man..i didnt think youd ever watch me back x3

Badass pic there :3

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