"An unfortunate walk."
by Marksan
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a year ago
2472 "An unfortunate walk."
02/25/2025 16:44
"Have you ever ride a chakat?" Asked the woman.
"Hmm? Do you mean sex? - No, never." Answered Mark.
"On what did you think of first?" Asked the woman.
"Well... It's a long story." Answered the man, remembering something from the past.
***
"It looks like a good day, and a very nice place here." Said Mark, walking in the park outside the city with Star.
"Yeah, I told you that you will like this planet.
"Besides, a large part of the planet is still uninhabited and partly unexplored, and on the outskirts of the inhabited territory there are very few people, - so you will always have the opportunity to walk alone and rest, as you are used to." Replied Star.
"Yeah, sometimes I really need it too," said the man sitting on the trunk of a fallen tree.
"Dammit..." Sighed the man, when he slipped and fell, feeling a faint crunch in his leg.
"Are you okay?" Asked Star, looking anxiously at hir Dad.
"Yes, I'm okay," Mark said, walking more slowly. "Such trivia will won't stop me."
"I'm worried about you, you're limping." Replied the chakat.
"Yes, it hurts a bit, but I think I'll be okay. Although the way home will take a little longer with my current speed..."
"Sit on me," said Star, coming closer to him and inviting him to sit on hir back.
"I'm too heavy, and don't worry about me, I'll be fine," replied Mark.
"I insist. Do you remember how you carried me on your back in this large backpack? Do you remember how you worried and looked after me when I was little?
So give me this chance to take care of you, and don't tell me that you'll be fine!" A bit more aggressively responded Star, leaving Mark no choice.
"I still feel stupid in this situation. I hope nobody sees me now," Muttered Mark, as he rode on the back of the chakat, looking around.
"Don't worry, nobody here except us" happily smiled Star.
***
Done privately.
It was my funny idea to show how Star cares about hir Dad, and that chakats are actually really strong. And Seth helped me with this. Thank you, Seth!
Due to war and some ...other difficulties with my real life, I can slow down a bit and post various interesting things here less often.
***Also please note that my story is in the process of being written, and most of these small fragments that I published are not in chronological order.
(Chronology always was a real pain for me.) So when I finish my plans I will try to put everything in order. If I even can...
I publish my stories in "dynamic mode", according to the available pictures, current situations, my mood, or in connection with the previous posting, etc. So I can often ignore the chronology of events.
The story and all characters belong to me
Marksan
The wonderful drawings and most of character desighn are kindly made for me by
sethtriggs For which I am very grateful for his help in portraying all this - because without his vision and pictures I would never have been able to tell this story. He really did a lot for me.
We still have "Tales of Chakona Discord for fans" - a cozy place where we usually gather. But after the recent ...flooding infestation, the rules were changed slightly. So ask around for an invite PM.
I am nice with talking to people. I swear. )))
02/25/2025 16:44
"Have you ever ride a chakat?" Asked the woman.
"Hmm? Do you mean sex? - No, never." Answered Mark.
"On what did you think of first?" Asked the woman.
"Well... It's a long story." Answered the man, remembering something from the past.
***
"It looks like a good day, and a very nice place here." Said Mark, walking in the park outside the city with Star.
"Yeah, I told you that you will like this planet.
"Besides, a large part of the planet is still uninhabited and partly unexplored, and on the outskirts of the inhabited territory there are very few people, - so you will always have the opportunity to walk alone and rest, as you are used to." Replied Star.
"Yeah, sometimes I really need it too," said the man sitting on the trunk of a fallen tree.
"Dammit..." Sighed the man, when he slipped and fell, feeling a faint crunch in his leg.
"Are you okay?" Asked Star, looking anxiously at hir Dad.
"Yes, I'm okay," Mark said, walking more slowly. "Such trivia will won't stop me."
"I'm worried about you, you're limping." Replied the chakat.
"Yes, it hurts a bit, but I think I'll be okay. Although the way home will take a little longer with my current speed..."
"Sit on me," said Star, coming closer to him and inviting him to sit on hir back.
"I'm too heavy, and don't worry about me, I'll be fine," replied Mark.
"I insist. Do you remember how you carried me on your back in this large backpack? Do you remember how you worried and looked after me when I was little?
So give me this chance to take care of you, and don't tell me that you'll be fine!" A bit more aggressively responded Star, leaving Mark no choice.
"I still feel stupid in this situation. I hope nobody sees me now," Muttered Mark, as he rode on the back of the chakat, looking around.
"Don't worry, nobody here except us" happily smiled Star.
***
Done privately.
It was my funny idea to show how Star cares about hir Dad, and that chakats are actually really strong. And Seth helped me with this. Thank you, Seth!
Due to war and some ...other difficulties with my real life, I can slow down a bit and post various interesting things here less often.
***Also please note that my story is in the process of being written, and most of these small fragments that I published are not in chronological order.
(Chronology always was a real pain for me.) So when I finish my plans I will try to put everything in order. If I even can...
I publish my stories in "dynamic mode", according to the available pictures, current situations, my mood, or in connection with the previous posting, etc. So I can often ignore the chronology of events.
The story and all characters belong to me
MarksanThe wonderful drawings and most of character desighn are kindly made for me by
sethtriggs For which I am very grateful for his help in portraying all this - because without his vision and pictures I would never have been able to tell this story. He really did a lot for me.We still have "Tales of Chakona Discord for fans" - a cozy place where we usually gather. But after the recent ...flooding infestation, the rules were changed slightly. So ask around for an invite PM.
I am nice with talking to people. I swear. )))
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Star the practical one, would have been much more difficult situation for a human
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