Hey there - the commissioner has been showing these updates to me and I LOVE them. Your artwork is very nice!

I'd like to point out a slight anatomy issue. In the front and back view, his shoulders are incredibly round and are poking out a little much from his body frame. As if he has some shoulder pads stuffed in on the ends of his shoulders. If that makes sense? I can totally redline to show you what I'm talking about

Thanks.

Eh, sure if you want to.

Yeah, I mean, not telling you to fix it, especially since it's already inked and colored! I just wanted to point it out to help you with your general anatomy! I like getting feedback on even finished work. I tell them there's nothing to be done or that I really don't want to edit it, but I keep it in mind for next time!

Shooting you a note