My computer couldn't read the file

Were you able to view it on downloading the file?

No, that's what I tried first. It just says, my computer can't read the file.

Tried changing it. See if it works now. Most of the stuff I upload is Microsoft Word documents. But if you can't see them I can try changing them.

Work's. Your character is pretty cool! Maybe all the scientific inventions are a bit too much. I mean, a time machine, and a device to modify the laws of physics? Still, pretty cool, and so is darrel.

Heh, I just like turning science fiction into science fact. :P But I'll make a note that such things are over the top in the future. Thanks for the pointer.

You have to download it.

I like it. It's pretty well written and covers all the basic details and then some. Plus, it gives you a small idea on his history, sort of summarizing what could have been a back story.

Hm, that was very interesting, it was cool to learn about ya :3

Since no one else wants to say it, I will - Drakin, your character is too powerful. It seems like every aspect of Drakin is taken to such a ridiculous extreme that it makes Drakin almost a god.

I'm not saying that Drakin is a bad character, but it's just that it gets very difficult to roleplay with a partner's character who can do anything, be anything, know anything, when I've tried to keep my character very balanced and average. The time machine, reality-bending spaceship, and neverending satchel, among other things, are all a bit much.

I may be overreacting, but a good rule of thumb is to focus only on things that the character needs. Don't load up on trivalities, possessions and abilities that the character doesn't really need until they become applicable. It's fine for Drakin to have a castle with a lab, and the businesses thing is a bit silly but that's fine too, but why would Drakin have a spaceship, or a room as huge as the known universe, et cetera?

Like I said, I'm not trying to condemn your character, I'm just saying that it IS frustrating to try to RP with a character who has no limits, and flaunts it.

Well I'm not changing the character 'Drakin'.
Maybe everything is to an extreme and I appreciate you coming out and saying it, but I wanted to cover as many possible story types with him as possible. He is the 'hub' as it were for my other characters, the proverbial ‘Deus Ex Machina’. So if I'm playing with another character, get in a tight spot, and need to create a way out of it, Drakin is the reason for it.
I put this description up here for two reasons: One, so I don't have to endlessly describe my character to every new fur I meet; and two, so I can identify exactly what you pointed out, what makes him too much so future characters I make can seem more three dimensional without being over the top like him.
As I said, I'm not changing Drakins character; I've had him too long to start over. But at least now by doing this I can see what is excessive and not do that with any new characters I make.

Eh, it can just be fun to go over the top once in a while and if there's a ready character for that... I know, this may have changed in the three years that this has been around, just was sayin' XD

Besides, trust me when I say I know of furs with characters a lot more powerful. One of my best friends has a character that's a demi-god and his his own plane of realty under his complete control.
So what if it's a bit over the top. It's fun to play with like that in /private/ RPs.

Sweet desc of yourself Drakin ^_^, I should think about soemthing like that for myself one day