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The Doe of My Nightmares... (Ch.4)
And that's exactly why Claire belongs in something like "Chaotic Quintet," even though she's not as much of a "natural chaos-causer" like practically the rest of her quintet: while Jimmy's attracting injuries to himself, Claire's got a knack for attracting the right kind of people and all to cause chaos for her instead. Speaking of, apologies for taking away from the "seriousness" and "tension" that the demonic invasion is meant to have in the actual tale of "Dreams Come True" toward the end; but then again, the beauty of writing styles is the same as art/drawn ones, in that no two ones are alike. I mean, I'm someone who doesn't like pure darkness and sorrows, I like to throw in some lighter moments and all-- especially when it helps the darker moments keep a stronger edge whenever they happen.
Also, I honestly can't tell which Alexis uneases me a little more, regarding matters of DCT vs "The Doe of My Nightmares." Yes, there's the obvious with TDOMN having Alexis feel stronger negativity about Billie and being a tad colder, plus growing jealousy is always a concern; however, I recall feeling uneasy when Alexis was complimenting Billie, as they stood together in her workspace...
Also, I honestly can't tell which Alexis uneases me a little more, regarding matters of DCT vs "The Doe of My Nightmares." Yes, there's the obvious with TDOMN having Alexis feel stronger negativity about Billie and being a tad colder, plus growing jealousy is always a concern; however, I recall feeling uneasy when Alexis was complimenting Billie, as they stood together in her workspace...
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