I have been feeling down emotionally for the last hour. I needed to do something... This is what I thought of. No planning, just typed...
I feel somewhat better now.
I feel somewhat better now.
Category Poetry / Miscellaneous
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Size 120 x 120px
File Size 1.1 kB
Where do I begin.....
I see this replayed in reality an infinite number of times. The sadness, depression, and loss of being so alone, so trapped. So afraid.
Great job, I really enjoyed the poem. Quite moving. Call me insane, (You'd be more right than you know)
But I have a way of "feeling" the emotions writers have while writing. (OK, well, in the writing.) I felt the despair, the isolation. You did quite well making this poem powerful in words and emotion.
Be careful though. Don't get caught up in the flood. It's too easy to lose people that way...
I see this replayed in reality an infinite number of times. The sadness, depression, and loss of being so alone, so trapped. So afraid.
Great job, I really enjoyed the poem. Quite moving. Call me insane, (You'd be more right than you know)
But I have a way of "feeling" the emotions writers have while writing. (OK, well, in the writing.) I felt the despair, the isolation. You did quite well making this poem powerful in words and emotion.
Be careful though. Don't get caught up in the flood. It's too easy to lose people that way...
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