"Dawn" of Team Rocket's Dominance
This story is a direct sequel to: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/57696668/
Its done! My Halloween story is finished-The FUCK do to you mean its almost Christmas?!
Ugh, Anyway. I really liked how a lot of this came out. I'll fully admit its more genuine story than sexy stuff. But a good balance of both never hurt. You can tell I'm a fucking Pokemon nerd with some of the stuff including lol. However, part of why this took so long was I got heavily demotivated because I had a Mandela Effect with Turnback Cave. If you know sinnoh, Turnback Cave is not in Mt Coronet but I didn't know this. The story doesn't work as well if the climax isn't set in an isolated place so that fucked with my motivation for a while. but I pulled through wanting to finish this before the year ended.
This also is somehow my longest story and its by over 20% of the previous one, hell its nearly double the length of Shygal Uprising and I thought that story was long. The next Team Rocket chapters won't be nearly as long I promise. Funnily enough this wasn't part of the original plan. but I do like it as a sort of bridge between stories 2 and 4. Next time however...
Next Time some other franchises get added into the mix~
Any constructive criticism is always welcome, I'm always looking to grow as a writer.
Its done! My Halloween story is finished-The FUCK do to you mean its almost Christmas?!
Ugh, Anyway. I really liked how a lot of this came out. I'll fully admit its more genuine story than sexy stuff. But a good balance of both never hurt. You can tell I'm a fucking Pokemon nerd with some of the stuff including lol. However, part of why this took so long was I got heavily demotivated because I had a Mandela Effect with Turnback Cave. If you know sinnoh, Turnback Cave is not in Mt Coronet but I didn't know this. The story doesn't work as well if the climax isn't set in an isolated place so that fucked with my motivation for a while. but I pulled through wanting to finish this before the year ended.
This also is somehow my longest story and its by over 20% of the previous one, hell its nearly double the length of Shygal Uprising and I thought that story was long. The next Team Rocket chapters won't be nearly as long I promise. Funnily enough this wasn't part of the original plan. but I do like it as a sort of bridge between stories 2 and 4. Next time however...
Next Time some other franchises get added into the mix~
Any constructive criticism is always welcome, I'm always looking to grow as a writer.
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