Boring and Moorings? Impressive. That being said, at some points it felt... overdone, in terms of word choice, although I really can't talk, my poems are worse for that.

Overall, it's pretty decent, I enjoyed it.

very good for someone who is bored....

I was bored...............lol....................if it was decent than I did good. although I think the whole god thing may put some astray and say stuff. but Im atheist so I don't really think its all that bad.

Thats how this summer is different. Every summer before High School went by too fast to do the things we wanted to. Now, it seems as if the world is slowing down. Maybe we just have to find a way to get past what we have done and go to what we havent. I need to figure out how to get out of this time warp thingie......... Maybe ill play a super old game that I havent. I think I found Breath of Fire II for the Gameboy Advanced, Ill start playing that later........ I actually wrote a poem describing you, but somehow I lost it......... Ill see if I can find it, then Ill post it here when I do so keep an eye out!

heh, will do itchigo, you know if I had to pick a online friend to hang out with someday it'd be you. honestly I don't think I've talked to anyone else more online. and if you find the poem and submit it I shall thank you appropriatly!................

Ill make sure to try to find the poem, I know its here somewhere. My Documents is strewn with Poems and corresponding Pictures to go with it. Have you checked out (What I think is) my best poem so far? Its called Skies of Amber Grey, and its very emotional. Link is here ----> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5893380

I think you meant content as in satisfied rather than contempt which means disapproval tinged with disgust.

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/contempt
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/content 2nd meaning