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I definitely need to do a lot of editing on this one, but if I keep looking at it it's going to drive me crazy so I figured I'd post it until I get around to breaking it down
This is Gabriel's pov of the same point that this week's weekly prompt takes place in. Tried to hint at a few things in world building and get some exposition from the party.
Oh, and I hate dialog.
Thumbnails an old sketch request from
This is Gabriel's pov of the same point that this week's weekly prompt takes place in. Tried to hint at a few things in world building and get some exposition from the party.
Oh, and I hate dialog.
Thumbnails an old sketch request from
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 14.7 kB
- Ooh this intro already got me hooked. Love the deet of de-wetting the feathers, and the way the bar reacts to seeing them fangs
- Personalities of the table are fun, too. Dig the way you use both mannerisms and dialogue to establish 'em
- lmao the li'l details of Gabriel fumbling with the too-low seat are good
- ...haha including him giving up and just sitting on the floor
- Oh ho ho, they know what Gabriel likes to eat? DAYUM it looks spicy af...love the way he grabs her wrist to say no no, it's perfect
- Oooh the mystery of that coin is fun -- makes me wonder if there's some kinda bull-related group out there
- lmaoooo him collapsing completely drunk is hilarious, good job with that description (and the way the party reacts)
- Nautilus is right, tho, he DID specifically say they wouldn't have to carry HIM out
- oh sup 'Atty'
- I always enjoy seeing people's 'drunk dialogue', yours is very charming.
- JEEZUS that mega-slap, gawddamn. I winced at the 'crack' when he hit the ground, love the way you detailed it happening as he fell so we know it means --
- -- yeah, broken wing, owie owie
- Atty is so calm afterward, no wonder the other three are just frozen in place. It makes him look extra sociopathic, mmm
- Another one'a them coins, eh? Yeah, very very mysterious business, I like it, tho. Good job with Gabriel's intro to the three, and Atremath's own, uh. "Introduction". Love how well you keep a mysteriously dangerous air around him, makes it easy to wanna see more.
- Personalities of the table are fun, too. Dig the way you use both mannerisms and dialogue to establish 'em
- lmao the li'l details of Gabriel fumbling with the too-low seat are good
- ...haha including him giving up and just sitting on the floor
- Oh ho ho, they know what Gabriel likes to eat? DAYUM it looks spicy af...love the way he grabs her wrist to say no no, it's perfect
- Oooh the mystery of that coin is fun -- makes me wonder if there's some kinda bull-related group out there
- lmaoooo him collapsing completely drunk is hilarious, good job with that description (and the way the party reacts)
- Nautilus is right, tho, he DID specifically say they wouldn't have to carry HIM out
- oh sup 'Atty'
- I always enjoy seeing people's 'drunk dialogue', yours is very charming.
- JEEZUS that mega-slap, gawddamn. I winced at the 'crack' when he hit the ground, love the way you detailed it happening as he fell so we know it means --
- -- yeah, broken wing, owie owie
- Atty is so calm afterward, no wonder the other three are just frozen in place. It makes him look extra sociopathic, mmm
- Another one'a them coins, eh? Yeah, very very mysterious business, I like it, tho. Good job with Gabriel's intro to the three, and Atremath's own, uh. "Introduction". Love how well you keep a mysteriously dangerous air around him, makes it easy to wanna see more.
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