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First time trying to upload something from my phone, hopefully it works right. First two thoughts were atty and Gabriel at some kind of fancy dinner and Gabriel being all :o about everything and a deers antenna being used like an antenna receiver. I think it was... interz or someone did something a while ago where a synth grows upon receiving data? So it turned into this. Ends a bit rushed because I wanted to get it done, and C4R1B0U is probably on the way as an OC, though will probably be a fluffy anthro before anything with a synth
... I like this idea a lot more than what I wrote, so I may end up revisiting it when I'm not trying to reach a deadline while being distracted by 30 other things
As always, hopefully enjoy and comments are appreciated ^^
... I like this idea a lot more than what I wrote, so I may end up revisiting it when I'm not trying to reach a deadline while being distracted by 30 other things
As always, hopefully enjoy and comments are appreciated ^^
Category Story / All
Species Deer
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 6.5 kB
Could use some more editing. The ones I notice are wording arrangements, scene and character transitions, words that need to be cut, maybe others but I'm not here to get to technical.
Im not an expert or pro editor by any means nor am I dictating how to write, but these are my personal opinions as a fellow writer.
You've got something and that's better than nothing so good job on that. 👍
Im not an expert or pro editor by any means nor am I dictating how to write, but these are my personal opinions as a fellow writer.
You've got something and that's better than nothing so good job on that. 👍
A'right, catch-up day --
- lmaooooo CARY, I remember you designing this guy.
- "Taking advantage of an antenna!" is probably the best come-on I've ever heard
- lmelp you found a GPS symbol but ALSO the growth signal
- I like the detail of the growth pushing Arryck out of reach, cute li'l detail
- ahaha lawd a moment of TERROR followed by accidental saving, good job big.deer
- "looked more like his body growing down to meet the ground" THAT is a fun descriptor, way to use the growth as a tool :wow:
- lmaooo v. funny how *Arryck* is the one getting mad; hey bro, YOU plugged yer shit in without askin', learn cable-consent next time
- Hahaha cute li'l ending, the two are still a-okay :ashley:
The idea of a synth character *growing* from downloading data was a fascinating li'l traipse -- kudos on you crediting the original thought, I thought your take on it was fun!
- lmaooooo CARY, I remember you designing this guy.
- "Taking advantage of an antenna!" is probably the best come-on I've ever heard
- lmelp you found a GPS symbol but ALSO the growth signal
- I like the detail of the growth pushing Arryck out of reach, cute li'l detail
- ahaha lawd a moment of TERROR followed by accidental saving, good job big.deer
- "looked more like his body growing down to meet the ground" THAT is a fun descriptor, way to use the growth as a tool :wow:
- lmaooo v. funny how *Arryck* is the one getting mad; hey bro, YOU plugged yer shit in without askin', learn cable-consent next time
- Hahaha cute li'l ending, the two are still a-okay :ashley:
The idea of a synth character *growing* from downloading data was a fascinating li'l traipse -- kudos on you crediting the original thought, I thought your take on it was fun!
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