Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Eagle
Size 750 x 1152px
File Size 376 kB
I laughed far more than I should have at "Fancy looking mushrooms."
It really does seem like you're doing a lot of story focus this time around, Stank. Because you're only revealing things slowly and keeping these characters in heavy shadow it does make them seem very mysterious. Also you wrote their dialog very differently from the more modern language Stank and the other characters have used, here the grammar and manner of speaking is rather archaic. I'm impressed you can write such different kinds of dialog so well.
In fact I've been impressed with your writing so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing more of it. You've done a great job with short comics in the past but we've never really seen a completed story from you. I really hope we get to see the rest of what you've thought up for the storyline. ^^
Thanks again for sharing your work Stank! Good luck with everything!
It really does seem like you're doing a lot of story focus this time around, Stank. Because you're only revealing things slowly and keeping these characters in heavy shadow it does make them seem very mysterious. Also you wrote their dialog very differently from the more modern language Stank and the other characters have used, here the grammar and manner of speaking is rather archaic. I'm impressed you can write such different kinds of dialog so well.
In fact I've been impressed with your writing so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing more of it. You've done a great job with short comics in the past but we've never really seen a completed story from you. I really hope we get to see the rest of what you've thought up for the storyline. ^^
Thanks again for sharing your work Stank! Good luck with everything!
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