A Storm Gathers (When It Happens - Part 2)
by Fenrirsmoon
TF writer
a year ago
Part 2 of my transformation mystery. The action is heating up soon. Part 1 is here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/58661709/ Part 3: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/58712953/A tense, unbroken silence hung between the three homesteaders as they sat, each studying the other across the cracked diner booth. John Flint, a rugged man with piercing, faded blue eyes, held their gaze with a firmness that defied the wear of years. Mara, seated beside her husband in the greasy booth, met John's stare with a gaze just as steely. Her husband, Daniel, kept his head low, silent as always, but the tension made him look older than he was. They all looked like they should be twenty years older than they were. They must've been gifted by a strange preservation, perhaps spurred by the mountains’ bracing air, or the steady diet of homegrown food. The world below, down in Dahlonega, was fifty miles and a lifetime away. Up here, in this quiet, almost ghostly town, they were anchored fast—and leaving wasn’t an option, even if they wanted to.
John's voice cut through the stillness like gravel against steel. “What were you thinking, Mara? Bringing the kid up here from Blue Ridge?” He shot a cautious look toward the girl in the corner booth, where she was absorbed in a coloring book. She was quiet now, oblivious to the world around her. Her bright blonde hair stood out in the dim diner, untouched by the streaks of gray that marred her parents, despite everything she'd witnessed.
Mara’s brow furrowed, and she tilted her head, defiant. “She’s seen it happen before, John. Three, four times now? She wasn’t scared at all. Beth's old enough to weather it. She'll be fine.” Her husband Daniel, broad-shouldered and wiry, sat silent but watchful, carrying the weight of a private burden he seldom spoke of.
“Besides... she has us to protect her. All three of us.” Mara glanced at her daughter with a trace of conviction. “And more folks are on their way down. Probably here already. That couple from Nashville, they drove all the way down.”
As if summoned by her words, the diner door rattled open, a shrill bell announcing the entrance of Jack and Sarah. They lingered just inside, taking in the diner’s worn-down homeliness before hesitantly settling at a scratched wooden table. Jack bounced a leg nervously, wringing his hands, while Sarah’s calm gaze took in every corner, waiting.
“Maybe we should go,” Sarah murmured, her voice low. “Doesn’t look like there’s anyone here, not even for coffee.”
John Flint’s half-smile was a mix of familiarity and faint menace as he rose from his booth and walked toward them, hand outstretched. “Well, if it isn’t Mr. Stanton. Still holed up with that camera of yours? Watching the birds?” His voice, gruff and gravelly, held an edge that made Jack pause before shaking his hand. John didn't sound like that three weeks ago when they first met. It made them uneasy. The diner was bone-chillingly cold, but John’s palm was hot enough to make Jack flinch.
“Yeah... you could say that.” Jack scratched his neck, avoiding John’s gaze. Something in the man’s eyes made him feel small. Sarah placed her hand over Jack’s, her voice wavering as she addressed Flint.
“It’s getting colder out there. We’ll be back down soon for more kerosene. And if you’ve still got deer meat, that too. But I’d love a cup of coffee right now.”
John straightened, hitching up his belt. Behind him, Mara and Daniel sat stiff and silent, observing the exchange. They knew the rules. Flint spoke, and they listened.
“Donna’s out back getting fresh eggs,” John said, his voice a low rumble. “Twenty hens, all hers. Everything in that fridge, except the ketchup, came from her.”
“Well, I’m impressed,” Jack chuckled for a moment.
As his voice trailed off, without warning, a violent gust of wind crashed against the awning, rattling the whole building. The diner door flew open and the bell chimes hanging from the door clanged furiously. Dust and dirt exploded through the parking lot, and the wind whipped itself inside the dining room like a hungry ghost, overturning salt shakers and scattering napkins.
But there was something strange in the wind—a bone-chilling scream, almost like a banshee’s wail mixed with a primal, otherworldly roar. It was a cry that belonged in a horror film, not in this quiet mountain town. An unnatural cold clung to the air, one they’d only felt in the heart of winter. And then, just as quickly, it vanished, leaving everyone shivering.
In unison, John, Mara, Daniel, and even Mara’s daughter rose to their feet, peering outside with strained intensity. John’s eyes narrowed, searching the horizon as if expecting to see something just out of reach. Jack and Sarah, pale and shaken, squinted into the distance, unable to spot whatever it was the others were looking for. Mara's daughter Beth ran over, clinging to her mother's leg like velcro... but her face never betrayed her fright.
Jack turned to John, his voice barely steady. “What... what the hell was that, Flint?”
John’s voice, a near-whisper, barely reached their ears above the chime’s wild clanging. “It’s coming.”
“What did you say, Mr. Flint?” Sarah’s voice quivered, her hand gripping Jack’s arm.
John’s gaze, filled with a deep, haunted knowledge, locked onto Jack’s. He was a Marine Corps veteran. Shot in Iraq. A man who'd who’d survived wars, floods, blizzards, and God knows what else. Now, he wore an unmistakable look of fear.
Mara and Daniel joined him, and Mara gestured silently for her daughter to come close. The girl ran to her mother, clutching her leg but still silent, her wide eyes mirroring the adults’ apprehension.
John’s hand moved instinctively to his hip, feeling for a pistol that wasn’t there. His voice came out louder now, cutting through the tense silence. “Mr. Stanton. Sarah. You need to go back home. Now. We’ll take the truck, meet you up at the cabin. With any luck, we’ll get through the trail before dark.”
Jack opened his mouth to protest, but a look from Flint silenced him. “What do you mean, ‘get through the trail’? It’s clear as day—”
“Damn it, I mean it,” John snapped, almost letting slip something he didn't think the Stantons were prepared to hear.
But Sarah already knew... or at least, she'd seen things that no sane person would believe, but they were real, nevertheless, and Jack had to face them... and himself. That's why they came down to the diner in the first place... in search of answers. She didn't want to keep Jack in the dark after making her promise to him, but it hadn't turned out to be the normal, peaceful breakfast she'd planned. Just a little bit longer... maybe when they got home. Then she'd sit him down and spill her guts out.
John softened his tone, crafting a quick excuse. “Could be a twister coming. They said on the radio there’s a storm headed northeast. This place isn’t safe, too much glass.”
With no further argument, the three homesteaders herded Jack and Sarah out the door, throwing a pack of bottled water, a box of nails, and some blankets into the truck bed. Daniel, finally breaking his silence, added a parting word in his calm, unfamiliar voice. “Batten down, Mr. Stanton.”
As the truck sped away, leaving a trail of red clay dust, John turned back to the sky. Ominous storm clouds gathered, twilight against the sun, dark and churning like an ancient, angry beast.
“I didn’t think it’d be so soon. Maybe a few more months. Maybe a year.” John’s voice was grim, steady as stone. He looked to Mara and Daniel, the weight of this fate settling on them all. “Hope you’re all ready. Because after tonight... none of us will be the same.”
The square-jawed giant of a man licked his teeth instinctively. He flinched as his tongue pricked itself on a tooth that was suddenly much sharper than it was supposed to be. “My God...” he muttered to himself. It was coming. It really was, after all this time. He just hoped and prayed that when it happens, they could stop it.
John's voice cut through the stillness like gravel against steel. “What were you thinking, Mara? Bringing the kid up here from Blue Ridge?” He shot a cautious look toward the girl in the corner booth, where she was absorbed in a coloring book. She was quiet now, oblivious to the world around her. Her bright blonde hair stood out in the dim diner, untouched by the streaks of gray that marred her parents, despite everything she'd witnessed.
Mara’s brow furrowed, and she tilted her head, defiant. “She’s seen it happen before, John. Three, four times now? She wasn’t scared at all. Beth's old enough to weather it. She'll be fine.” Her husband Daniel, broad-shouldered and wiry, sat silent but watchful, carrying the weight of a private burden he seldom spoke of.
“Besides... she has us to protect her. All three of us.” Mara glanced at her daughter with a trace of conviction. “And more folks are on their way down. Probably here already. That couple from Nashville, they drove all the way down.”
As if summoned by her words, the diner door rattled open, a shrill bell announcing the entrance of Jack and Sarah. They lingered just inside, taking in the diner’s worn-down homeliness before hesitantly settling at a scratched wooden table. Jack bounced a leg nervously, wringing his hands, while Sarah’s calm gaze took in every corner, waiting.
“Maybe we should go,” Sarah murmured, her voice low. “Doesn’t look like there’s anyone here, not even for coffee.”
John Flint’s half-smile was a mix of familiarity and faint menace as he rose from his booth and walked toward them, hand outstretched. “Well, if it isn’t Mr. Stanton. Still holed up with that camera of yours? Watching the birds?” His voice, gruff and gravelly, held an edge that made Jack pause before shaking his hand. John didn't sound like that three weeks ago when they first met. It made them uneasy. The diner was bone-chillingly cold, but John’s palm was hot enough to make Jack flinch.
“Yeah... you could say that.” Jack scratched his neck, avoiding John’s gaze. Something in the man’s eyes made him feel small. Sarah placed her hand over Jack’s, her voice wavering as she addressed Flint.
“It’s getting colder out there. We’ll be back down soon for more kerosene. And if you’ve still got deer meat, that too. But I’d love a cup of coffee right now.”
John straightened, hitching up his belt. Behind him, Mara and Daniel sat stiff and silent, observing the exchange. They knew the rules. Flint spoke, and they listened.
“Donna’s out back getting fresh eggs,” John said, his voice a low rumble. “Twenty hens, all hers. Everything in that fridge, except the ketchup, came from her.”
“Well, I’m impressed,” Jack chuckled for a moment.
As his voice trailed off, without warning, a violent gust of wind crashed against the awning, rattling the whole building. The diner door flew open and the bell chimes hanging from the door clanged furiously. Dust and dirt exploded through the parking lot, and the wind whipped itself inside the dining room like a hungry ghost, overturning salt shakers and scattering napkins.
But there was something strange in the wind—a bone-chilling scream, almost like a banshee’s wail mixed with a primal, otherworldly roar. It was a cry that belonged in a horror film, not in this quiet mountain town. An unnatural cold clung to the air, one they’d only felt in the heart of winter. And then, just as quickly, it vanished, leaving everyone shivering.
In unison, John, Mara, Daniel, and even Mara’s daughter rose to their feet, peering outside with strained intensity. John’s eyes narrowed, searching the horizon as if expecting to see something just out of reach. Jack and Sarah, pale and shaken, squinted into the distance, unable to spot whatever it was the others were looking for. Mara's daughter Beth ran over, clinging to her mother's leg like velcro... but her face never betrayed her fright.
Jack turned to John, his voice barely steady. “What... what the hell was that, Flint?”
John’s voice, a near-whisper, barely reached their ears above the chime’s wild clanging. “It’s coming.”
“What did you say, Mr. Flint?” Sarah’s voice quivered, her hand gripping Jack’s arm.
John’s gaze, filled with a deep, haunted knowledge, locked onto Jack’s. He was a Marine Corps veteran. Shot in Iraq. A man who'd who’d survived wars, floods, blizzards, and God knows what else. Now, he wore an unmistakable look of fear.
Mara and Daniel joined him, and Mara gestured silently for her daughter to come close. The girl ran to her mother, clutching her leg but still silent, her wide eyes mirroring the adults’ apprehension.
John’s hand moved instinctively to his hip, feeling for a pistol that wasn’t there. His voice came out louder now, cutting through the tense silence. “Mr. Stanton. Sarah. You need to go back home. Now. We’ll take the truck, meet you up at the cabin. With any luck, we’ll get through the trail before dark.”
Jack opened his mouth to protest, but a look from Flint silenced him. “What do you mean, ‘get through the trail’? It’s clear as day—”
“Damn it, I mean it,” John snapped, almost letting slip something he didn't think the Stantons were prepared to hear.
But Sarah already knew... or at least, she'd seen things that no sane person would believe, but they were real, nevertheless, and Jack had to face them... and himself. That's why they came down to the diner in the first place... in search of answers. She didn't want to keep Jack in the dark after making her promise to him, but it hadn't turned out to be the normal, peaceful breakfast she'd planned. Just a little bit longer... maybe when they got home. Then she'd sit him down and spill her guts out.
John softened his tone, crafting a quick excuse. “Could be a twister coming. They said on the radio there’s a storm headed northeast. This place isn’t safe, too much glass.”
With no further argument, the three homesteaders herded Jack and Sarah out the door, throwing a pack of bottled water, a box of nails, and some blankets into the truck bed. Daniel, finally breaking his silence, added a parting word in his calm, unfamiliar voice. “Batten down, Mr. Stanton.”
As the truck sped away, leaving a trail of red clay dust, John turned back to the sky. Ominous storm clouds gathered, twilight against the sun, dark and churning like an ancient, angry beast.
“I didn’t think it’d be so soon. Maybe a few more months. Maybe a year.” John’s voice was grim, steady as stone. He looked to Mara and Daniel, the weight of this fate settling on them all. “Hope you’re all ready. Because after tonight... none of us will be the same.”
The square-jawed giant of a man licked his teeth instinctively. He flinched as his tongue pricked itself on a tooth that was suddenly much sharper than it was supposed to be. “My God...” he muttered to himself. It was coming. It really was, after all this time. He just hoped and prayed that when it happens, they could stop it.
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