Getting some bad vibes there. Hope things go well.

Its fine right?

Love to see another page out haha, this was very good! For some reason I really like how big the horse's eyes are, they're almost anime-like which I find amusing. Also some good backgrounds on display here, almost look painted with the texturing (especially with the sky).

For the story, I'm guessing this feather was something she manipulated in the game's code when she was still in her previous world? Could be wrong but that's my best conclusion lol. Also that "monster" line from one of the backgrounders at the end reminded me of Nimona for some reason (I think because it seems Veezy will be somewhat ostracized after this page). Either way, it's a good note to end the page on, I remember commenting last page that each page kinda ends on a cliffhanger which I like. Overall, can't wait to see where things go next!

Thank you! Honestly I wasn't sure if I liked his eyes haha!
And I've been painting the backgrounds the whole time. I've been trying to find ways to make it look pretty and like it fits in nicely, its been a challenge but I've been enjoying it.

Interesting theory! I like it!
And yea I've not actually been doing it entirely on purpose. Its been a subconscious thing for me. But since your last comment I've been thinking about it more. So.. expect more of that~!

Hey, don't call her a monster, that's mean.

Right? That one background character we may never see is a jerk!

Monster? Sir, I prefer zhe term "Clam goblin."

Clam Goblin is accurate

"They call me zhat because I be gobblin' clams!"

Me zhinks zhe term 'clam gremlin' works better.

Very much enjoying. Quite interesting, hoping to see more!

Thank you! I am hoping to do more soon! I have the storyboards ready for the next few pages. I Just gotta work on em haha

Implementing things through code, huh... Hacker woman!
Also code stuff and talks of code, whuh oh.

Talks of code oh dear~!

Whoa coding.. SHE JUST LIKE ME FR FR!!!!

JUST like you

A very interesting story so far! Interesting that she should mention coding the feather in, as if it weren't already in the game...

Ain't it just~!

Yeah, what a mean thing to say, she is a Yinglet not a monster. Yinglets are not classified as one of the Monster Races..
Members of a monster race will attack you out of turn, just for the hell of it.
Yinglets will avoid you or be curious about you or wave at you.

Its VERY mean!

Man lemme tell ya, I don't like this guy one bit.

Off vibes are often how it goes huh.... I'm sure its fiiine