Always adds a bit of depth when you incorporate your own experience, in this case: awful, hot weather. Very nicely done, for sure.

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

I prefer something cold myself, but this text is quite good :)

Me too. I had the AC blasting and was miserable.

You need to come on over one of these days, and see how our autumn is; you'll love it.

I've experienced it before. It really is beautiful.

Hah I liked it. ^^ There is something nice about ending it with just very kinda declarative Indian Summer, and the very slight air of discontent about it (which I think is obvious with how you used word vengeance, but that Indian Summer at the end feels like having an antagonist in a story). Though maybe I added too much into it. But nonetheless it paints a nice picture in the mind.

Thanks Blaze. I was trying to invoke something a bit antagonistic there. I hate the heat so...

"Sun's final vengeance" sounds delightfully metal. I've always found Indian Summers a bit unsettling. It's supposed to be 80 degrees here for Halloween, only for it to immediately revert back to normal fall temps the next day.

To me they are less unsettling and more just obnoxious. I hate the heat and for us we had temperatures in the 90s before dropping to something far more tolerable.

I love it. This reminded me of summers in the south east where I grew up. Absolutely spectacular.

Thanks a ton Lu.

You're welcome! Thank you for sharing the poem.

Hehe.

*sighs... how many Indian Summers have I seen? I liked this one...

Vix

Thanks a bunch Vix.