For one, you're repeating that inwards arm swing movement a little too much. Try to variate, even when freestyling.

Another tip is you've got to get your locking waaaaaaaaay harder. It looks a hell of a lot like whacking since it's missing the "lock" feeling. Even though there are grooving and some waving is included in locking, what makes it locking are the sharp hitting motions that make your limbs lock into place.

Ah! I see. Yeah, the inner arm swing was overblown. Thanks. :)

omgosh :P ur good :3
do thos moves in a fursuit, that would be awesomesause ^-^

Really? Your the second on who's told me that. I have a really hard time believing I'm any good. XDD

yes really xD :333 lmao i wish i had half the dance skills you do :P im very un-hand eye cordinated lol

Hmm. Never thought of it that way. Cool!

new practice space I seee :P You have much more room to move around, so try to move around your surrounding. As far as the locking goes, Ryd3r already said what needs to be worked on. When it comes to Tecktonik try using your hips a bit more. That's what usually sticks out to me when I see people doing it, the hip movement is very distinct.

Keep it up

Sweet. I'll do that. Thanks.

I really need to find some time to make another video. Both my critiques have been said byRyd3r and Atsu. Looks good man.

Thanks.

aww CRAP I thought I was watching you >.< damnit I missed this :( well its ok, ima watch it now

Huh?

Basically I thought I was already watching you, and am annoyed at myself that I apparently wasn't and didn't see this when you first posted it.

Ah!