This is not the entire story of course. Cuts off WAY to soon xD
I started this a looooong ass while back and just found it again, been over it and edited a few things and I guess I just want any opinion I can get. Continue it. Start the new one I've been planning or just drop the whole idea xD
Thanks and bye!

PS: on a side note.. FUCKING QUESTION MARK SYMBOLS! (if they appear for anyone else too. Sorry.