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kiumCategory Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 1000 x 785px
File Size 510.4 kB
Wow, you did an awesome job Kium, I love the way you depicted him! ^^
The spots are perfect, thank you for doing them, I know how annoying such markings can be to do by hand. Thank you for not just using a brush or something. He's fluffy and looks as nicely built than I envisioned him. Especially the tail! FLUFF! *Pounces tail*
Thanks you, THANK YOU for drawing him with only four fingers! And thank you for including the secondary set of claws where they are supposed to be. It seems this is something that a lot of artist have difficulty with drawing properly. Tam's the same and she had been often drawn with a normal human hand with five fingers, while it states in the desc of their species that they have only four, thumb included.
Thank you also for not having the white fur extend to his thighs, like everyone seems to do as soon as it comes to felines. You got his coat and fur pattern perfect.
There's a few things to change though:
- His species does not have a dewclaw (or whatever it is you call the small pink pad on his right wrist seen on the 'back' pose), so, please remove it.
- The eyes should be more red overall. The iris is crimson red, bu the white part should be red as well, not pink. Akin to this: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4478814/ The completely red eye at the right is Nyry's. There's not that much difference between both parts of his eye.
- His ears have the same color than his fur, with a handful of spots on the backside.
- His tail should be twice as long as you've drawn it. It's almost as long as he is tall. Fill up that empty space behind him! :p But still only 6 black rings.
The spots are perfect, thank you for doing them, I know how annoying such markings can be to do by hand. Thank you for not just using a brush or something. He's fluffy and looks as nicely built than I envisioned him. Especially the tail! FLUFF! *Pounces tail*
Thanks you, THANK YOU for drawing him with only four fingers! And thank you for including the secondary set of claws where they are supposed to be. It seems this is something that a lot of artist have difficulty with drawing properly. Tam's the same and she had been often drawn with a normal human hand with five fingers, while it states in the desc of their species that they have only four, thumb included.
Thank you also for not having the white fur extend to his thighs, like everyone seems to do as soon as it comes to felines. You got his coat and fur pattern perfect.
There's a few things to change though:
- His species does not have a dewclaw (or whatever it is you call the small pink pad on his right wrist seen on the 'back' pose), so, please remove it.
- The eyes should be more red overall. The iris is crimson red, bu the white part should be red as well, not pink. Akin to this: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4478814/ The completely red eye at the right is Nyry's. There's not that much difference between both parts of his eye.
- His ears have the same color than his fur, with a handful of spots on the backside.
- His tail should be twice as long as you've drawn it. It's almost as long as he is tall. Fill up that empty space behind him! :p But still only 6 black rings.
Alright, I can probably fix those things today, I will try to make the tail longer. Sorry about the carpal pad xD I thought he would have one since most cats do. I can easily remove that. Same with the other things, those can be easily fixed. Once I have it done I shall let you know when I fixed it k? ;)
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