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I just hadn't pieced it together yet. Like, I knew time had passed, this page was were I realized time hadn't passed for her. I went through and read it on your site and it is much clearer what is happening. I actually love the way you are writing the chapters there as mostly contiguous experiences from a single alter's perspective at a time. This one in particular is just like, fuck, she was just a couple hours ago looking at having friends and respect and maybe a career as a dancer for herself, like as herself not sharing it. And then Oops, not only is that all gone but like, possibly years of her life and their system doesn't even share the memories so she has to piece it together from fucking context clue. Sorry, this is a long comment, but basically this very effectively written and drawn and is like, a horrifying thing to imagine as an alter.
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