Oh yeah, this is the good stuff. I swear I'm gonna take a chance to write something based on one of your pics one of these days.

Ooooooh, this is very good story! Your storytelling is as good as your art!

Adorable story here :] glad you’re making the best of your situation too! Hope to see more stories

Very nice story! The description of their waddling and subsequent loss of mobility was very well articulated.

Poor Raichu. Having to deal with all that for nearly a week!... Certainly not a very fair predicament for them considering the circumstances. I certainly hope whatever adventurer found them in the original image is able to safely escort them back somewhere safe!

To add onto my previous comment real quick because it totally slipped my mind, if my praise wasn't already proof enough I'd love to see you tackle more stories in the future! I love the writing in your short comics and descriptions and I feel they really help elevate your art to a higher level.

Havent read this yet but in already getting ideas if you were open to any suggestions for future stories :).

I've been writing blueberry inflation stories for a decade now (even writing stories dating all the way back to September/October 2005, 19/20 years ago but SFW nevertheless), I tend to find writing a ton easier since you just have to type/write out the words instead of having to draw artwork for the characters each time you do it (and let me tell you, it is much more tiring to do drawing or comics then it is with writing or speaking).

very nice! the changing tense is a bit distracting, but the descriptions are hot!

Excellent job. All the vivid descriptions match your drawing style perfectly! ^^

I like

Woah




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