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Thursday_Prompt 'Appalling'
Not got much to say here, just a fun little thing for this week as I try my best to come up with ideas. I do wanna talk about this stories macguffin though. First off, I do not actually have such a screenplay standing by, it is however something I have been considering; would y'all be interested? What is it about? Think of it as something similar to 1990's Begotten. Secondly, the novel it claims to have been based off of does not exist, at least as far as I know. Other than that, not much to say. Enjoy.
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The Abbey in the Oakwood by Caspar David Friedrich (1810)
Thursday_Prompt 'Appalling'Not got much to say here, just a fun little thing for this week as I try my best to come up with ideas. I do wanna talk about this stories macguffin though. First off, I do not actually have such a screenplay standing by, it is however something I have been considering; would y'all be interested? What is it about? Think of it as something similar to 1990's Begotten. Secondly, the novel it claims to have been based off of does not exist, at least as far as I know. Other than that, not much to say. Enjoy.
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The Abbey in the Oakwood by Caspar David Friedrich (1810)
Suspended disbelief- temporarily allowing oneself to believe something that may or may not be true, especially in order to enjoy a work or critique of fiction.
Hope you enjoyed the writing/art work you've seen, *Please* leave a comment, it'd be much appreciated! Thanks. 
"Art is born out of an ill-designed world." "The allotted function of art is not, as is often assumed, to put across ideas, to propagate thoughts, to serve as an example. The aim of art is to prepare a person for death, to plough and harrow his soul, rendering it capable of turning to good." -filmmaker, Andrei Tarkovsky, on what the purpose of art is. 
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Then it was a blessing sent from God, 'cause I did not have that in mind till just before I finished it (to be fair though, it was based of a lyric from a song, which is funny since it's title is called Soldier's Poem and the band who made it is called Muse).
"Secondly, the novel it claims to have been based off of does not exist, at least as far as I know."
Lol, and here I was looking for it for a few minutes. I think name Edyta doesn't exist in English?
And Begotten looks interesting. I might try to watch it. If you were to write something similar to it that would be quite an original work.
Oh and does it turn out that it was me as The Orb in the previous story? I thought it was a cool idea with an orb in a dream. And I like that sort of things, like interacting with someone in a dream. ^^ Even when Helix wrote a story for me it was about that.
And I liked how you portrayed Cheera here. It seemed like a realistic and relatable way to behave. Also was Q-Tip so broken like with that detroyed house just because of that screenplay he wrote? It already has an eldricht lovecraftian feel to it with what emotions it produces in those who interact with it.
I liked this story a lot and thanks for making me appear here. :3 It's always nice. I hope the screenplay doesn't break my mind this time. And that was a fun line with Ask Dead. It's exactly the point no one would get what it even means, lol. Ah, and was there time when I met with Cheera earlier? Maybe outside of stories.
And that meeting with Nex was intriguing. Concept of being someone's fursona is weird. I hope he doesn't feel too bad about the state of things changing. Also I wish Q-TIp getting rest from violent and dark stuff if he needs it. ^^ I would feel similarly to Cheera probably in that sort of situation, but maybe better to accept it. And I hope Q-Tip or Nex aren't too angry at me for taking the forbidden screenplay away. But in regards to Cheera and her approach to your predicament, I think Nex was also definitely right about there being some good in what you create. These dark thoughts are there anyway and trying to just ignore them won't help.
Lol, and here I was looking for it for a few minutes. I think name Edyta doesn't exist in English?
And Begotten looks interesting. I might try to watch it. If you were to write something similar to it that would be quite an original work.
Oh and does it turn out that it was me as The Orb in the previous story? I thought it was a cool idea with an orb in a dream. And I like that sort of things, like interacting with someone in a dream. ^^ Even when Helix wrote a story for me it was about that.
And I liked how you portrayed Cheera here. It seemed like a realistic and relatable way to behave. Also was Q-Tip so broken like with that detroyed house just because of that screenplay he wrote? It already has an eldricht lovecraftian feel to it with what emotions it produces in those who interact with it.
I liked this story a lot and thanks for making me appear here. :3 It's always nice. I hope the screenplay doesn't break my mind this time. And that was a fun line with Ask Dead. It's exactly the point no one would get what it even means, lol. Ah, and was there time when I met with Cheera earlier? Maybe outside of stories.
And that meeting with Nex was intriguing. Concept of being someone's fursona is weird. I hope he doesn't feel too bad about the state of things changing. Also I wish Q-TIp getting rest from violent and dark stuff if he needs it. ^^ I would feel similarly to Cheera probably in that sort of situation, but maybe better to accept it. And I hope Q-Tip or Nex aren't too angry at me for taking the forbidden screenplay away. But in regards to Cheera and her approach to your predicament, I think Nex was also definitely right about there being some good in what you create. These dark thoughts are there anyway and trying to just ignore them won't help.
Haha, I had a feeling someone would eventually do it. And yes, Edyta is not english.
I believe the full movies somewhere: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vvwGtlzTKYQ Trust me, it would absolutely interesting if I do make it come to be.
Indeed it does mean you were the orb. I did not know that Helix had done something similar already; what a coincidence (Except I don't believe in them).
Yeah, I tend to observe real life behaviours and reactions in order to bring my characters to life. I (Q-Tip) destroyed it out of my anger at it's loss.
You're welcome. I'm sure you'll be fine, you seem crazy enough to be on my level of understanding I'm sure you'll be able to understand it better than anyone else. As for meeting Cheera, yeah it was outside of story, but who knows maybe you could bring said story to life one day.
Q-Tip's the one who's upset, Nex is the one who really doesn't mind and just wants to help Cheera out. And yeah, you're correct; for always there is a good in everything be it small or big.
Thanks for reading, the kind thoughts, and once again, you're welcome for the cameo.
I believe the full movies somewhere: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vvwGtlzTKYQ Trust me, it would absolutely interesting if I do make it come to be.
Indeed it does mean you were the orb. I did not know that Helix had done something similar already; what a coincidence (Except I don't believe in them).
Yeah, I tend to observe real life behaviours and reactions in order to bring my characters to life. I (Q-Tip) destroyed it out of my anger at it's loss.
You're welcome. I'm sure you'll be fine, you seem crazy enough to be on my level of understanding I'm sure you'll be able to understand it better than anyone else. As for meeting Cheera, yeah it was outside of story, but who knows maybe you could bring said story to life one day.
Q-Tip's the one who's upset, Nex is the one who really doesn't mind and just wants to help Cheera out. And yeah, you're correct; for always there is a good in everything be it small or big.
Thanks for reading, the kind thoughts, and once again, you're welcome for the cameo.
Your thought about me being crazy enough made me smile... let's hope so. /ᐠ. .ᐟ\ And wow, I made him really angry. Do you still plan on writing the story with time travel? If yes I hope Q-Tip wouldn't have knowledge that it was me who took it, because otherwise I am scared of what he would do to me. xD
And here is that story Helix wrote in case you would want to check it out https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54448527/ I wasn't an orb, but it happened in a dream where I was talking to someone who entered it in his sleep.
A good practice with using real life behaviors when bringing characters to lfie. I like how you are writing characters and interactions they between each other. And overall you are good at writing. I wish you a nice day then. ^^ Aaaaah, and yeah about you mentioning coincidences in context of these stories with me in them; in case of Helix it was based on my idea for the story, and in your case it was probably connected to things like what my character is like and what it usually does. So technically not a coincidence, but a result of stuff.
And here is that story Helix wrote in case you would want to check it out https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54448527/ I wasn't an orb, but it happened in a dream where I was talking to someone who entered it in his sleep.
A good practice with using real life behaviors when bringing characters to lfie. I like how you are writing characters and interactions they between each other. And overall you are good at writing. I wish you a nice day then. ^^ Aaaaah, and yeah about you mentioning coincidences in context of these stories with me in them; in case of Helix it was based on my idea for the story, and in your case it was probably connected to things like what my character is like and what it usually does. So technically not a coincidence, but a result of stuff.
This was fun to read! Love the idea of a place where our muses and fursonas can manifest and interact. Thought at first it was some "otherrealm" outside of the main plane of existence, then realized Cheera was present physically in Q-Tip's world, enough to open his box of secrets and take the story.
Wuff does hope Q-Tip will be okay following the discovery of his loss. He really looks upset, fromthe condition of the house and that paper in typewriter. Perhaps he can channel those emotions into another, even more powerful creation? Maybe Cheera can help him do that.
On the writing: Vrghr found one minor area that confused this wuff. You mentioned there was an acinonyx rex cleaning the bar glasses. But the next sentences described another cheetah behind the bar. Vrghr wasn't sure if those were two different characters, or if the rex had suddenly shape-shifted into a cat. The latter seems quite possible in that realm. *grin*
All in all, this was fun. And wuff really hopes Q-Tip pulls through this okay. Generating such feelings for your characters in your readers is a very good sign.
Wuff does hope Q-Tip will be okay following the discovery of his loss. He really looks upset, fromthe condition of the house and that paper in typewriter. Perhaps he can channel those emotions into another, even more powerful creation? Maybe Cheera can help him do that.
On the writing: Vrghr found one minor area that confused this wuff. You mentioned there was an acinonyx rex cleaning the bar glasses. But the next sentences described another cheetah behind the bar. Vrghr wasn't sure if those were two different characters, or if the rex had suddenly shape-shifted into a cat. The latter seems quite possible in that realm. *grin*
All in all, this was fun. And wuff really hopes Q-Tip pulls through this okay. Generating such feelings for your characters in your readers is a very good sign.
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