Afterwork - 1
More of my comic practice thingies. I feel my speech bubbles re generic and I need to work on my dialog. Hopefully all the faults of this comic re made up for by Eliza's bust size.
Also Eliza and Twiggi are roommates and a couple. Extreme opposites attract! :p
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Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 800px
File Size 400 kB
Listed in Folders
Twiggi's emaciation is almost appalling in a real way. Of course, Eliza's presence sort of evens things out.
However, as this demonstrates, let it not be said that you don't know how to draw things other than huge fat and muscle.
If I were to remark on the comic style itself, you seem to have the hang of panels and borders figured out. My only complaint would be the size of the dialog font; it's much too small to read comfortably, and gives the impression everyone is speaking quietly.
However, as this demonstrates, let it not be said that you don't know how to draw things other than huge fat and muscle.
If I were to remark on the comic style itself, you seem to have the hang of panels and borders figured out. My only complaint would be the size of the dialog font; it's much too small to read comfortably, and gives the impression everyone is speaking quietly.
Thank you for the feedback!
I always like Twiggi for her disturbing appearance her her extreme opposite body type. It makes her fun to draw and something to contrast Eliza's massive body.
I fixed the size of the font as you suggested and I hope its a more comfortable read now.
I always like Twiggi for her disturbing appearance her her extreme opposite body type. It makes her fun to draw and something to contrast Eliza's massive body.
I fixed the size of the font as you suggested and I hope its a more comfortable read now.
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