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(Hiya! I made this short one shot as practice for other story of mine, but I wanted to share it, please share your thoughts on anything like the transformation so i know what to work on.)
“Lightcordx09 Thanks for the Donation!” The brown haired 24 year old chuckled as he sat sluggishly in his chair. Beep! “Huh? Oh another donation, Hey Oscar I ordered something from your store but I still haven’t gotten- alright mods we got a troll here get them out of here! Listen guys, it’s in stream rules that you don’t complain in here if you have a problem take it to my discord server and tell a mod there.” Oscar wasn’t the Kindest person far from it actually, he’s been a known controversial streamer in the community for a number of reasons. Yet he doesn’t care, he’ll still stream without a care in the world for anything he causes from it.
“So chat what do we want to do today? I got all day free so might as well spend it with all of you!” Oscar grinned Beep! “Donation from Lycoln! Let's see what you have to say. You should check out this site called Lycanroc.tf. If you do, I'll gladly Donate you a good load.” “Pffft, how much are we talking here?” Oscar snarled “100 Dollars to visit the site, I bet you won’t pussy!~ Ohh you’re fucking on!”
Oscar sat straight as he moved his mouse to open a new tab and began typing in the url. “You better be ready to give me that fucking money!” Oscar pressed enter and the site loaded up shortly after. Immediately Oscar stared at the site page, feeling almost memorized by it, something about it intrigued him. He wanted no needed to know more about this strange site BEEP! “GAH!- Fuck!- shit..” Oscar panted as he looked at the donation “Good boy! Here's the money I promised you.”
“Thanks…” BEEP! “Oscar, are you okay?” BEEP! “You were staring at that site page for a long time man.” BEEP! “Maybe you should log off and rest?-“ BEEP! The Notifications of Oscars viewers donating, asking him if he was okay kept getting louder and louder to him, for some reason it felt like his hearing somehow grew more sensitive. He covered his ears in hopes of quieting the loud sounds but instead he felt something on his ear, it felt fluffy?
“Grrr- What the hell..? what is this?” Oscar used his Computer camera and Monitor to look at what was on his ear and he saw what looked like red fur. “Is that- Fur?! GAH!” Suddenly Oscar felt his Jaw snap and extend with great force.
CRACK! Oscar could feel his insides burning up, it felt like his bones were breaking and reforming at immense pace and all he could was huff and pant as the torturous changes grew worse and faster “Huff Huff Gra- what’s happening to me?!” Red Fur began growing rapidly all over his torso to the point of it pressing against his shirt for freedom “Grrrrrr..!” Oscar in a fit of discomfort pulled his shirt off and threw it onto the ground, he looked down at his chest and saw all the fur growing, the red fur had started to spread to his arms and legs as white fur grew onto his stomach. “WHAT THE HELL?!-“ He fell down onto his knees as he felt the anguishing pain getting worse “Grrr…SOMEONE HELP ME!”
The cry of help was meant with nothing but more bone cracking and forming, tears began filling Oscar's eyes. He helplessly looked down at his hands that were forming together into three fingered paws with giant claws forcing their way out of them. “Pant pant SHRED! GRRRAH!” A small tail tore its way out of Oscar's shorts leaving the rest of it to fall onto the floor. Soon Followed his hair growing and forming itself into a white mohawk with a huge black tip to it.
“Grrr…” Oscar shut his maw shut and eyes closed tight as he felt a huge stab in it as his teeth shaped into sharper wolf like teeth. Four small sharp rocks soon formed onto his torso as his feet morphed into three toed paws just as his hands did with pointy claws forcing themselves out as well. Oscar popped his now glowing red eyes as he howled “AWOOOOOOO!!!!!” Right after he fell onto his back passing out from the pain the transformation brought to him with the last thing he could hear was a race of loud beeps coming from his computer.
“Lightcordx09 Thanks for the Donation!” The brown haired 24 year old chuckled as he sat sluggishly in his chair. Beep! “Huh? Oh another donation, Hey Oscar I ordered something from your store but I still haven’t gotten- alright mods we got a troll here get them out of here! Listen guys, it’s in stream rules that you don’t complain in here if you have a problem take it to my discord server and tell a mod there.” Oscar wasn’t the Kindest person far from it actually, he’s been a known controversial streamer in the community for a number of reasons. Yet he doesn’t care, he’ll still stream without a care in the world for anything he causes from it.
“So chat what do we want to do today? I got all day free so might as well spend it with all of you!” Oscar grinned Beep! “Donation from Lycoln! Let's see what you have to say. You should check out this site called Lycanroc.tf. If you do, I'll gladly Donate you a good load.” “Pffft, how much are we talking here?” Oscar snarled “100 Dollars to visit the site, I bet you won’t pussy!~ Ohh you’re fucking on!”
Oscar sat straight as he moved his mouse to open a new tab and began typing in the url. “You better be ready to give me that fucking money!” Oscar pressed enter and the site loaded up shortly after. Immediately Oscar stared at the site page, feeling almost memorized by it, something about it intrigued him. He wanted no needed to know more about this strange site BEEP! “GAH!- Fuck!- shit..” Oscar panted as he looked at the donation “Good boy! Here's the money I promised you.”
“Thanks…” BEEP! “Oscar, are you okay?” BEEP! “You were staring at that site page for a long time man.” BEEP! “Maybe you should log off and rest?-“ BEEP! The Notifications of Oscars viewers donating, asking him if he was okay kept getting louder and louder to him, for some reason it felt like his hearing somehow grew more sensitive. He covered his ears in hopes of quieting the loud sounds but instead he felt something on his ear, it felt fluffy?
“Grrr- What the hell..? what is this?” Oscar used his Computer camera and Monitor to look at what was on his ear and he saw what looked like red fur. “Is that- Fur?! GAH!” Suddenly Oscar felt his Jaw snap and extend with great force.
CRACK! Oscar could feel his insides burning up, it felt like his bones were breaking and reforming at immense pace and all he could was huff and pant as the torturous changes grew worse and faster “Huff Huff Gra- what’s happening to me?!” Red Fur began growing rapidly all over his torso to the point of it pressing against his shirt for freedom “Grrrrrr..!” Oscar in a fit of discomfort pulled his shirt off and threw it onto the ground, he looked down at his chest and saw all the fur growing, the red fur had started to spread to his arms and legs as white fur grew onto his stomach. “WHAT THE HELL?!-“ He fell down onto his knees as he felt the anguishing pain getting worse “Grrr…SOMEONE HELP ME!”
The cry of help was meant with nothing but more bone cracking and forming, tears began filling Oscar's eyes. He helplessly looked down at his hands that were forming together into three fingered paws with giant claws forcing their way out of them. “Pant pant SHRED! GRRRAH!” A small tail tore its way out of Oscar's shorts leaving the rest of it to fall onto the floor. Soon Followed his hair growing and forming itself into a white mohawk with a huge black tip to it.
“Grrr…” Oscar shut his maw shut and eyes closed tight as he felt a huge stab in it as his teeth shaped into sharper wolf like teeth. Four small sharp rocks soon formed onto his torso as his feet morphed into three toed paws just as his hands did with pointy claws forcing themselves out as well. Oscar popped his now glowing red eyes as he howled “AWOOOOOOO!!!!!” Right after he fell onto his back passing out from the pain the transformation brought to him with the last thing he could hear was a race of loud beeps coming from his computer.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Pokemon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 80.7 kB
I liked how accurately you nailed the douchey streamer way of talking and how brutal you made the changes sound with the bones snapping. It was a bit hard to distinguish between his spoken dialogue and the sound effects since they kinda blended together, but this is a promising start for being a small writing exercise! Great work!
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