Momo, if I recall correctly, was the one who pointed out that the line art from the previous WIP of this image was too thick and took away from the shading - she suggested making the inking different hues. Or she didn't. I forget. EITHER WAY, after her comments, I knew that she was right that the inking sucked. SO. I revised it, and this is my progress.

FOLKS. Use the vector tools in SAI. They are delightful for inking.
I am sure the perspective is ALL WRONG, also his foot is leaning on a skate board thats not drawn in.