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posted 14 years ago Professional Squee-er

This is a piece that I've been working on for a little while; I'm looking for opinions of what you think about it... This is a Work In Progress, mind you, but any thoughts would be nice. :D

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*updated 5/15/11 with some minor changes and clarity fixes*

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Category Story / Fantasy

Species Western Dragon

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snowbird9945 ~snowbird9945

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14 years ago

can't even open it XP

Wisty ~wisty

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14 years ago

Let me reupload it as something else

Wisty ~wisty

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14 years ago

OK, Try now? It's an RTF

snowbird9945 ~snowbird9945

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14 years ago

works o:

Wisty ~wisty

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14 years ago

Alrighty! Lemme know what you think of the story? Especially the tf bit; the middle feels soooo rushed though, hence why this is up for considerations.

snowbird9945 ~snowbird9945

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14 years ago

haha, now THAT was a fucking story! well done, good dragon. i quite enjoyed it and will be looking forward to more in the future! also, it didn't seem rushed at all, to me. >3>

Wisty ~wisty

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14 years ago

Thank you! But mind you, it's still a work in progress! Any thoughts on how I can improve it? Hehe

snowbird9945 ~snowbird9945

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14 years ago

i dunno.... your writing style is vastly differing from mine. yours tends to focus greatly on vast amounts of details... mine is just, sort of simple. i'm not sure i could offer any advice that would be relevant. ._.

Wisty ~wisty

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14 years ago

Ah, no worries then! I'm just glad you enjoyed it! :D

Morghus ~morghus

Hoodie Wearer

14 years ago

Oh wow *blinks* interesting! It's a story with my character! How nice, I'm looking forward to more

Wisty ~wisty

Professional Squee-er

14 years ago

*giggles softly and smiles* did you like it? I thought it was way too short and a lot was cut out... I can keep going if you'd like? :D

Morghus ~morghus

Hoodie Wearer

14 years ago

Yes why not! I'd like to know moooore

Wisty ~wisty

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14 years ago

*smiles softly and giggles gently* alrighty then! If... I may ask, Did you like the story itself?

Morghus ~morghus

Hoodie Wearer

14 years ago

it is well written, although a little confusing at first because I didn't know what was going on, but I guess I'll find out more if it continues!

Wisty ~wisty

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14 years ago

*nods softly and giggles* not if... when. Sadly, my queue is pretty larger, so it may or may not be a little while before part 2 gets finished

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