o.O wtf is with the pic?

lobsters having a knife fight >.>

how does it relate?

not one bit.
i just put a random thing there <.<

i hate the little block thing that says "story" or "poem"
thats why its like that

lol ok

did you even read what i put up?
@.@

can I just eat them. I already have a nut cracker in one hand a bib with a lobster on it, and well some hot smoldering butter. :3

......what the fuck are you even talking about?!?!!!!!

things that have to do with eating a lobster. duh

did you even read what was there?!!?!!!!!!!
what i spent quite some time typing up???

or did you turn your entire focus the the random ass picture i just slapped on there?!!!!!!

I read, i fapped, i liked.

lol, your going to love it when i finish it then!

Its good to as standard form.

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Other than the fact that they don't wear tighty whities (which I guess isn't gonna matter later anyways, since they're already nekkid), this is fantastic! It was cute how Richard makes a subtle noise when he get really shy. So cute.

My only two cents of advice: It seems like you begin almost every sentence with the words "I" or "he", so you should probably alter the syntax in your sentences more often. And secondly, you really should use line breaks each time one character stops speaking and the other starts speaking. That really makes things less confusing for the reader.

Lookin forward to more.

^//^
thanks man!!!

I'll try to work on the I/he sentance starters. thanks so much man!!!

totally kewt and nice. and yeah the sentance starters are about the only thing that might need looking at ;)