One of my more experimental strips. Loads of fun to plan out and do, although there's some question of how clear it is. I'd apprecate some feedback from that end.

Couple of interesting things you may not notice here, this is one of the first strips I've done with guidelines for the text, so it's not all over the word balloons. It's also the last one I did using a 05 Micron to letter with, starting with Wednesday's strip I use a 01, with a 05 or 08 for emphasis words. It makes the lettering seem a bit less cramped.

Archives, as always, are here:
http://kels.comicgenesis.com

2B pencil, Microns, Sakura brush and 1mm pens, Sharpie, poster paper