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lightdarkbender14 featuring my Zodiac characters and some of his characters.
Again, there is a lot of dialogue in this comic. It's kind of an exercise for me as is drawing people doing very mundane things like eating and drinking. I'm curious to hear your comments. Please let me know what you think.
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lightdarkbender14 featuring my Zodiac characters and some of his characters.Again, there is a lot of dialogue in this comic. It's kind of an exercise for me as is drawing people doing very mundane things like eating and drinking. I'm curious to hear your comments. Please let me know what you think.
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Category All / Comics
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Size 1586 x 2323px
File Size 1.15 MB
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As someone who's writing style has been referred to as "talking heads", given my short stories are very commonly two characters having some meaningful conversation with each other, I can get how "dialogue heavy moments" can be seen as "slow" or "dull". It is a thing that happens though, and on this page at least I think you do a solid job of including good visual variety. Taures's date is the most straightforward really, so it gets a simple single panel side shot. Capricorn's has a bit more genuine emotion to it, getting two panels at different angles, whereas I get the impression that Virgo's date is something of the "main attraction" without making the other two meaningless, getting three panels with three distinct angles. Going top to bottom there's a frame difference with all the characters that keeps it from being the same double profile shot over and over.
Celsius that HOT TEMPERED PANDA HAS A POSSESSIVE GIRLFRIEND? sorry but...I think it explains his usual angry behavior if she is as paranoid as mentioned here.
also the long chat don't bother me at all, it's even VERY NORMAL in a situation like that, you did great.
also the long chat don't bother me at all, it's even VERY NORMAL in a situation like that, you did great.
Oh yes, one more thing was the bug on the plate, as mentioned in the Capricorn picture with all the insects that’s one of their food sources, heh, wonder what it taste like. Probably a bit off but it looks a bit like a pill bug, to me anyways.
There’s also fish there in the second round of panels, but haha of course that’s a bit more normal to us hoomans here naturally.
There’s also fish there in the second round of panels, but haha of course that’s a bit more normal to us hoomans here naturally.
I like how detailed the shading is in this particular comic. Especially in the close-ups. Makes it enjoyable to notice the details. That said, of all the male heroes, I also prefer Shadow Star. Business, yet kind, and precise, and tries to squash any rumors.
Also, kinda funny if not ironic to see the lion character (I forgot his name!) have a bug on his plate. Could that be a reference to The Lion King, where Simba, as he grew up, had to survive on eating insects? May be a coincidence.
Also, kinda funny if not ironic to see the lion character (I forgot his name!) have a bug on his plate. Could that be a reference to The Lion King, where Simba, as he grew up, had to survive on eating insects? May be a coincidence.
Probably a coincidence, Egg says that insects are one of the things they eat besides fish
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/56639363/ - this picture if I’m not mistaken.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/56639363/ - this picture if I’m not mistaken.
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