I can upload the instrumental version if my vocals make your ears bleed too much. hahaha

not bad...i enjoyed it...only think i would recommend is balancing the parts out so the most important line of each succession stands out above the rest...it gets lost at a few places in there

okay thanks!

My suggestions:

The violins that come in at 00:28, quiet them down just a little bit so that they fulfill their purpose as harmony and not try to be melody, which is your flutes.

00:54 - More than just the single violin. I'd do two at the least. I'd also have the flutes playing a bit louder up until that point, because that's when they turn from melody to additional harmony.

I agree with Zionia at 03:03 when she says balance is required. If this were a live band, I'd say they weren't reading their dynamic levels correctly.

Overall, a good rendition. Doesn't quite have the mysterious appeal that the original does, but it DOES have a good calming, yet intense flare.

okay thanks!
I purposely did some things that way because it was the way I visualized it. Just my style i suppose. hahaha

Thanks for the comment my friend!!
^_^

Np.

btw, have you gotten the messages I sent to musiccritique? It shows that they've been read, but I've no response to them.

Hmmm...let me check. One sec.

i remember the first time i heard this song; it's was while i was watching a Heavy Rain Trailer (that has got to be one of the best games i've ever played). i instantly loved it.

you, sir, made it about 100 times better. this is amazing!

Thank you very much!!

oops i forgot to log out of that account.
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haha
Thank you very much!

the violin melody was a tad too staccato for my taste. I have had to play this song on cello and i managed to score the melody as a solo, and i was instructed to put my flair into it, but keep the fluidity of the piece. I enjoy the piece, very well done. at 3:00 i do love the falling arpeggio, great twist! Favorited!

I have no ear for music
but I liked

LOVE IT... ahem err It's very good I like this very much

YAY! Way better than the droll of the same name from lord of the rings. No joke, this is one of your best works that I've listened to.

Thank you very much. That was very encouraging. I was feeling kinda down with this song, feeling that there wasnt much positive feedback on this and people didnt care for it as much (since most of my remixes are video game related. and because I had my vocals in it (which I'm not very comfident in anyway haha))
Thank you for the comment!!!!

After only stumbling across your tracks a little bit ago I'd have to say this is one of my fav's that I've listened to so far.

Thank you so much!

You've done a wonderful remix to one of my new favorite songs. C: Sounds amazingly awesome.