Fun, had some interesting ideas on your inspired take. As someone who has been to the real silent hill, it is kind of like that, radios borked in the fog and everything.

I'm grateful to hear you thought this one was fun.

Silent Hill: a great tourism location! Radio static, fog, and large buff men sporting pyramid shaped metal helmets atop their domes carrying a knife bigger than I am... wait, what was that last one?

Thank you very much for having taken a look at this one, very much appreciate it.

I relate to Noah

I'm not certain if I fully understand what you found relatable in Noah's character, but I suppose you might mean that sometimes trying to support friends can be a bit draining. I hope things are a bit easier for you.

I'm grateful that you'd read over this one, thanks much for that.

It's for his skepticism.

This was a fun read. A good amount of creep factor, and makes me wonder what happens to Noah and his friends.

I'm grateful that you'd say this one was good fun and creepy. I do kind of want to continue this one so I might just try and thick up something for the three paranormal investigators.

I very much appreciate that you'd take the time to read this one, thank you for that.

You're welcome. You're a pretty good writer.

You are quite good at keeping the biting cold air in focus throughout this entire thing. A double-take moment I had was referring to Todd as a bovine rather than a caprine. Not incorrect, but unspecific enough to make me read that part over twice to confirm I had read goat like I though I had LOL

Oh, did I forget to mention it's cold out? Better bundle up!

Oh, I knew leaving it at bovine sounded off, but I had entirely glazed over caprine. Had gone so far as to double-check myself by looking up the full scientific name; saw "Bovidae" and just wound up running with bovine. Something I'll need to keep in mind for next time; thank you for bringing that to my attention.

I'm grateful that you'd read through this, thank you very much for that.

Just leave Noah! Your friends are gone, it's too late, just leave! It'll be fine, you can start a new life in a new town that isn't near a haunted foggy city.

Shelby, there's nothing to be afraid of: ghosts aren't real, remember... T-they're not, r-right?

Truth be told, I had originally planned to have Noah fall asleep for an undetermined length of time and he would wake up to find the keys to the van missing. Decided not to go that far; his friends need him and he ain't afraid of no ghost!

Thanks much for having looked this one over, very much appreciated.

Oh now that was a creepy one! And Lilly's right, Noah is a kill-joy, though he might be right this time ;)

Edit: Actually I suspected the message on the radio was that Lilly and Todd had returned to where they had left the van and couldn't find it or Noah!

I'm glad to hear you thought so, I was trying to build a bit of a creepy vibe with this one. He might be a kill-joy, but in his defense, he had signed up for a camping trip with his friends and not ghost hunting adventures... I don't think he's getting much a choice anymore though!

Oh, that could be an interesting twist: he goes searching for them despite the two already having come back to find he's the one that's missing! So many interesting directions this one could go in!

I very much appreciate that you'd read through this, always grateful for that.

Ahhh what a fun adventure. I hope that nothing happened to his two friends... *ears droop and looks away in doubt*

Draubin is such an amazing town to live in! They have their own local radio with great music. And weather is nice for those who don't like when it's too hot! Also fitting for nocturnal furs. :3

I'm glad to hear you thought that the intro was fun, I do kind of want to build on this one a bit. I'm sure his friends are fiiine... *twiddles thumbs and looks away in doubt*

You know it! I can't stand it when the temperature is much over 20 C / 70 F; that plus the music makes for a great vacation destination in my book!

Thanks much for taking the time to read over this one, very much appreciate it.

"Ghosts are not real, none of that mumbo jumbo is."

Noah you fool! You can't just say that and then act surprised that you become the protagonist of a survival horror tale.

And you've got me nostalgic now. It's been forever since I've played Silent Hill.

He should probably watch his mouth; never know when what you say is turned against you!

Probably a bit obvious, but I'm looking forward to the Silent Hill 2 remake.

I'm grateful that you'd take the time to look through this one, thanks much for that.

and that's the way a story like this should be written... classic horror found within the unknown...

kudos...

Vix

One shudders to imagine what lies beyond the veil of fog...

I'm grateful that you'd be willing to look this one over, thank you much as always for that.

I've sometimes wondered how hauntings would come off if they were playing up the scent aspect of things, instead of the sights and sounds some species think about the most.

Ohhhh, that's a brilliant aspect I hadn't considered; I'll have to incorporate that into this if I do continue it! The scent of ghosts and demons... surprisingly fruity!

Thanks much for having read over this, I'm grateful you'd do that.

It’s not worth it, Noah. Get out of there and bring in the professionals. Anyways, fun and creepy. Good start to a horrifying adventure.

The professionals: James Sunderland, the ghostbusters, Casper. Though I'm not too sure any of them are available... Guess it's up to the amateur then!

I'm grateful that you'd look this one over, thanks much for that.