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Fagin feeds Mr. Bumble (Page 15 of 16)
The page 15. We're almost ending the comic!
Here I needed to change the script. Added more pannels like in previous one and change dialogs because they didn't match Fagin's expression
Fagin here is happy, but in the
NightCrestComics's comic the blue fox had an indifferent expression.
Also it kinda shocks me that the NightCrestComics's comic doesn't use any onomatopoeias besides the munching and gulping at the speech bubbles. But I think this happened because I'm used to reading and making comics coming with a lot of onomatopoeias and effects...
So I added "gulp" and "whack" to a pannel.
Here I needed to change the script. Added more pannels like in previous one and change dialogs because they didn't match Fagin's expression
Fagin here is happy, but in the
NightCrestComics's comic the blue fox had an indifferent expression.Also it kinda shocks me that the
NightCrestComics's comic doesn't use any onomatopoeias besides the munching and gulping at the speech bubbles. But I think this happened because I'm used to reading and making comics coming with a lot of onomatopoeias and effects...So I added "gulp" and "whack" to a pannel.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Canine (Other)
Size 800 x 1000px
File Size 1.62 MB
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