Not bad, particularly for your first musical endeavor. The electric-guitar-ish sound (introduced at 0:05) is way loud -- I'd recommend you turn that down to about 2/3 or 1/2 its current volume. Otherwise, it's quite nice and well-done.

Woot!

My first piece of feedback... thank you so much Shadomew!

For my next song I'll keep that in mind!

'We're all animals in the end',

ZXC

It seems very good for a first attempt! Catchy, nice sound, and it has some variety. I'm not an expert, but I say this certainly doesn't seem like a first attempt!

Oh,

I'm flattered... it is my first attempt though, so getting your feedback really helps to inspire me.

Again, thank you for your continuous dedication to my variety of work man!

'We're all animals in the end',

ZXC

I realy liked it ^^ keep it up!!!!!

Thanks!

And I'm really happy that I caught your attention... I just wish that I'd have this music making program permanently. I'm on a trial, you see. But then again, If I get enough feedback, I might go for it and buy the software!

Again, thank you.

'We're all animals in the end',

ZXC

Rather enjoyed it. Good job fur your first one*howl*

Thanks Bro!

And the positive comment really helps!

'We're all animals in the end',

ZXC

Glad to hear it

Hey man,

I never would have guessed you were doing this.
You seem to excel at any art put in your way.

I thought this was way good for your first track. You've done this before... I know it!

I swear to you that this was my first attempt...

I spent three days prior to this on the program, learning about it, and this is the final outcome!

Two more songs are on their way!

'We're all animals in the end',

ZXC

This is really good! I would've never expected it to be your first. But u have to agree with shadomew that is is quite loud at that part. There is also something about the string intsrument that goes in at 3:20 that bothers me. I don't know what it is becuase it could very well be the fault of my crappy headphones. But besides that, very well done! (though, I'm not a musical genius nor make music so I don't really know that much)

-Ansem

Thanks for the comment!

Using Shadomew's feedback, I made another one, and I'll be submitting it soon!

'Were all animals in the end',

ZXC