I so want to be doing this right now ; 3 ;
Chrissy leaning on her tail, enjoying the warm weather on the beach :D
I didn't like this picture for a long time, but now it's done I like it! For now XD
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 1280px
File Size 1.47 MB
This is pretty awesome.
Since I started watching you a while ago you've gotten progressively better at art, so I'm going to start giving tidbits of constructive criticism that while you may brush off at first could potentially bug you enough to think about them in the future, and if I'm lucky I'll be helping a fellow artist to grow.
I only really have two small complaints here: the boobs and the right foot. I'll start with the foot because I hate feet. The angle of the foot is well-imagined and not entirely unrealistic, but does contain a degree of simplicity that creates a "bland" area in the image. Aside from that, the size differentials of the two visible toes is somewhat wonky, especially compared with the strict sizing of the toes of the left food.
Now for my favorite part, the boobies. While one of Chrissy's arms is outstretched above her (where you made a valiant attempt at portraying the pull of the skin and thus the fat of the breast), the shape is too far exchanged to make the best sense in comparison to the mass of the other boobie. Also, the placement of that pulled-up boobie likely should have wandered of more towards the side of the body.
HOWEVER, the character design altogether is awesome, the pose is fun, that little beam of sunlight is a wonderful cherry on the sundae, and the hair looks pretty nifty for the most part. And as always, I enjoy your coloring style and method.
Also disregard this statement because I always feel like an ass for criticizing anyone's work, even though I feel some criticism might help me.
Since I started watching you a while ago you've gotten progressively better at art, so I'm going to start giving tidbits of constructive criticism that while you may brush off at first could potentially bug you enough to think about them in the future, and if I'm lucky I'll be helping a fellow artist to grow.
I only really have two small complaints here: the boobs and the right foot. I'll start with the foot because I hate feet. The angle of the foot is well-imagined and not entirely unrealistic, but does contain a degree of simplicity that creates a "bland" area in the image. Aside from that, the size differentials of the two visible toes is somewhat wonky, especially compared with the strict sizing of the toes of the left food.
Now for my favorite part, the boobies. While one of Chrissy's arms is outstretched above her (where you made a valiant attempt at portraying the pull of the skin and thus the fat of the breast), the shape is too far exchanged to make the best sense in comparison to the mass of the other boobie. Also, the placement of that pulled-up boobie likely should have wandered of more towards the side of the body.
HOWEVER, the character design altogether is awesome, the pose is fun, that little beam of sunlight is a wonderful cherry on the sundae, and the hair looks pretty nifty for the most part. And as always, I enjoy your coloring style and method.
Also disregard this statement because I always feel like an ass for criticizing anyone's work, even though I feel some criticism might help me.
If you write them as nice as this each time don't feel bad about offering critique x3 I enjoy it because it helps me learn! It's when people make out that there's nothing but flaws I may get sadfaiced :D I try not to be overly sensitive but it's hard XD
I agree with everything you wrote. I need to practise feet SO badly, but every time I start to study them I lose interest so fast, which is dumb because I love paws! I just need to actually sit down and practise, like I have been with hands x3 I totally forgot about her toe size difference. It slipped my mind! I'll keep a better eye on it later.
Both her arms are supposed to be pulled up ^^;;; I really should look up more references when doing this sorta thing XD I like guessing too much!
I agree with everything you wrote. I need to practise feet SO badly, but every time I start to study them I lose interest so fast, which is dumb because I love paws! I just need to actually sit down and practise, like I have been with hands x3 I totally forgot about her toe size difference. It slipped my mind! I'll keep a better eye on it later.
Both her arms are supposed to be pulled up ^^;;; I really should look up more references when doing this sorta thing XD I like guessing too much!
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