First page of Igazi Lezimpisi!

I'm always open to constructive criticism and improving my art skills. So if you have piece advice, don't hesitate to say it :)

In this scene, Toti and her friend Nelisiwe are talking together beside a river. However, they don't realise that they are being watched by Zondo and his friends.

Igazi Lezimpisi means 'Blood of the Hyenas' in Zulu.

The plot is loosely based off the stories of Shaka Zulu.

Gazi (who doesn't appear until the next chapter) is a young hyena princess and heir to the throne. Her father, the corrupt king Zondo exiles her from the kingdom.

Now she's out for revenge. She soon gains allies and raises an army, not with the intent to reclaim the throne, but to destroy the monarchy as a whole and reform hyena society for the better!

I don't want to take forever making this comic, so I'm focusing more on the quantity of the pages, not the quality.
I can make a highly detailed page, but it will take me a million years and the comic will never get done.
So if some of the pages look shoddily made, that's why.