This is just a compilation of three poems that I wrote for class in junior high. I don't think they're very good, but I figure why not put them up anyway? So, yeah here's "Civil War" self-explanitory, "Golden Gate Bridge" about a fuzzy memory from when I was very young, and "Life" just a random sentiment about life.
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Cool.
Short and sweet, short enough that you fit three in one... here's some quick feedback;
All three were really well described, and at the same time kept form and had a good flow. For some writers, in their endless pursuits for that next level of description, they get lost... this was not the case for you.
So ya, all in all, it was good.
'Were all animals in the end',
ZXC
Short and sweet, short enough that you fit three in one... here's some quick feedback;
All three were really well described, and at the same time kept form and had a good flow. For some writers, in their endless pursuits for that next level of description, they get lost... this was not the case for you.
So ya, all in all, it was good.
'Were all animals in the end',
ZXC
Thank you.
It's hard for me to think of these as anything more than just something I had to do for a class, because that is what they are. I don't think they're good for that reason, perhaps if they were spontaneous I could accept them truely as good art.
But I guess the worth of anything is assigned by the audience, and you being the audience and praising me for them must mean they are good. :)
It's hard for me to think of these as anything more than just something I had to do for a class, because that is what they are. I don't think they're good for that reason, perhaps if they were spontaneous I could accept them truely as good art.
But I guess the worth of anything is assigned by the audience, and you being the audience and praising me for them must mean they are good. :)
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