Man, with something as simple as the word cash, I expected only one page. But you turned it into a story about transformation.

Yeah, I genuinely have no idea how I manage to drone on for so long like this. It was just two pages before going to bed last night and now... I get carried away and I do apologize for that.

Despite the absurd length, I am very grateful that you'd take a look at it, thanks much for that.

That was great. Reminded me of another individual who went in for some clinical trials for money and ended up with a fur coat. Just without the doctor being completely evil. I think it was the animal stuff in the waiting room that really put the two together immediately.

Anyways, I liked the whole build up and the decisions that brought him to this point and the coda scene of them reuniting. Also, red fox? Good choice.

He got lucky: he got the good doctor who is just a bit of a jerk with a short temper.

Though, I don't understand what you're talking about with the animal posters being a hint to what was to come. How would multiple postings about various animal species, their anatomy and physiology, and research studies on them in any way suggest what the trials would be like? Hmm, maybe you have a point, but I still think the staff just like animals.

Thanks much for reading through this one, very much appreciated.

Money + Become fox? Seems like a win-win situation to me. And I wouldn't say the story is too long. You had a good build-up like Roidh said. Ten pages means little to someone who reads as much documentation as I do.

Well, to be fair, he didn't really know what to expect going in. Fortunately, it does seem things are working out in his favor. I'm also glad to hear that the length didn't bother you too much; I genuinely didn't intend to go this far again, but... there I go hoping again...

Very much appreciate that you'd take the time to read this, very grateful for that.

Yikes! At least this all ended well! I'd think I would want to understand a study before jumping into it lol. Glad El seemed okay and didn't kick him in the shin! That really smarts!

"Oh, she only goes for the shins when she's super pissed with me! Ain't that right, El--Aaah!! Ow!!" Fernando started before El kicked him the shin.

I'm grateful you'd say you thought that this all went over well, thank you much for having read over all of it.

I'm glad it all turned out OK in the end, and good choice Fernando even if you didn't know what you were actually going for! Also Fernando the Fox huh? Just noticed that ;)

Now I'm curious what the other options were and what exactly the doctor hopes to achieve with his research?

"the staff either had a sense of humor or enjoyed the company of animals" - false dichotomy! ;)

Fernando the Fox... to be entirely honest, I only just noticed that as well!

"Other case studies we had available would include Oryctolagus cuniculus, Canis lupus, Rodentia--"
"Doc! English, please!"

Dr. Kasper might not be open with his end goal and he might come across as a bit of a... rude dude, but the endgame for his research is well intentioned.

Thank you very much for having looked it over, always grateful for that.

heh you should have said that was the plan all along ;)

I admit had to look the first one of those up, I did know the other ones, and of course Vulpes Vulpes! Do we find out what the doctor has planned overall?

Uh... I mean, yeah, of course I planned that out! It's all a part of the master plan, after all!

Dr. Kasper's a bit reserved about his motivation, but he'll probably reveal it after he warms up a bit... that might take time though; he's a bit jaded.

*chuckles… he did it for the right reason and at least he chose correctly… I’m just say’n…

Vix

When it's for someone you love, nothing will stand in your way. I also won't argue about his decision, I know better than to argue with a Fennec!

Thanks much for having read through this one, always very much appreciated.