your poems always involve dark things. and they are rather short.........but you are decent for a poet. keep working!
I'd like to see longer poems tho!


sorry length really bugs me. just something that always has.
but for a short poem its still good

The reason my poems involve "Dark" things is because I can never get my former years of life out of my head. Nothing ever went right those days and I guess it just comes back to haunt me.

Actually I did write one long one before this. If I remember right the title was "Darkness"

Short and sweet (or dark).

You've got some good rhyme here, and the theme was reoccurring throughout (like you didn't stray off topic).

'Were all animals in the end',

ZXC

Thanks for all your help. Ill try to see if I can extend my clauses more, and ill see if there's anything I can improve on.

Ok,

so since I never respond to my shouts via shouting, I'm dropping something off here.

As it must of become apparent, I found the poem that I responded on, which ultemetly led you to watch me.

I'm happy you liked my stuff, and to keep updated with your submission, I'm going to watch you.

Now, as for your page. It seems as though you've had a dark past... which I can relate too. Originally, my homepage description was similar to yours, but I remodeled it as I taught myself to move on.

The past is the past... don't forget it, but don't let it take you out. I had to learn that the hard way after attempting suicide and failing (So happy it failed).

Life is just beautiful, especially once you learn to look past humankind's unfortunate flaws; past the bullying, racism, segregation, and cruelties, to see just how wonderful it really is to be living here.

Thanks for listing,

'Were all animals in the end',

ZXC

I see what your getting at here, but its not so easy in my shoes. All 12 years of school was like hell. I pretended to be sick just so I wouldent go there. Theres no way ill ever forget that. Its hard to look past something that everyone has. Whenever someone told me I was queer, I always replied "Thanks for the compliment" Its just sad that they never got at what I was hinting at. Queer means different. Why should you call someone what they already are?
Ill never forget anything that will or has happened to me. My reason? I want to show the world, even if you have problems, you can get over them. I want to show people that I am somebody. But most of all, I want to show the world what its like to be hated, thrown around like garbage, called a waste of space, and what 5 suicide attempts were like. I want to show people, problems are another part of lifes complications that people go through. Just other, more vigorous.

Very well.

Your decision is your own, and it's a good idea to tell the world what you went through by writing.

I'll leave it alone until you come looking.

'Were all animals in the end',

ZXC

Thanks its great that you understand why. I will write some things that may not be so dark, but as one person once said, "You can try to forget the past, but some will remain" For me this is true. No matter how hard I try the past is there like day and night