it was a decent story as far as I read, but I kinda have to go to bed right now.but I want to finish it.. got as far as the car ride....but I need my rest.........now that I look at this it kinda looks like a letter, more than a comment.
ummm........to make it sound less letterey............I noticed you have a very extensive vocabulary, which is good for a story writer, or a poet, such as myself.
......and you seem to like the word sulk............

Thanks. And Kaitilin was using the word sulk over and over to rub it in. She likes to tease. I'm glad you read some it. I hope you read the whole thing soon. Rest is important though. Hard to do anything well without enough rest. This is something I know about.

ehhh.............cliffhangers annoy me sooooooo much......but of course if it wasn't there then the story would kinda fade outta my mind....soooo it kinda a good thing........
I wonder what truely happened to little kaity that snowy day.
ohh well if you finish I guess I ll know

good story hon...i like how the siblings tease each other