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Spirit of the Wolves

by Faolan_Wolf-Wings Writer

15 years ago

This would be my first story. I hope you like it.

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Category Sub-Category Species Resolution File Size Story Transformation Wolf 120 x 90 17.5 kB

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wolf boy transformation girl pack alpha silver knife man hunt cycle time spirit wolves forest u_faolanwolf-wings c_story t_transformation s_wolf

Helix Teller of Tales ~helixthefallen

Storyteller

15 years ago

Many people on FA can't read .docx, it is better to post in .rtf, .doc, or .txt encoded in UTF-8 format.

AlexWolfe ~alexwolfe

Writer

15 years ago

I'd say this falls more in the category of poetry, instead of story. Regardless, that was quite a piece of work. The imagery was detailed to the point were I could visualize the scene, but not to the point were it could be come oppressive. I'd say you got a talent for poetry based of this. A talent I wish I had sometimes. Ah well, I'll stick to my fiction shorts and leave the poems to those who can do them right.

Faolan_Wolf-Wings ~faolanwolf-wings

Writer

15 years ago

Eh... Hehe... I'm sorry. I did not reallize it until it is submitted. Still, I have a few other stories up my sleeves. Stay tuned, because there will be more stories in progress waiting to be submitted.

Hiishougeki ~hiishougeki

Anime Artist

15 years ago

this is a beautiful story

ShadowyRedWolfy ~shadowpack123

Photographer

15 years ago

That was very well written and extremely poetic and beautiful, an excellent job ^^

Faolan_Wolf-Wings ~faolanwolf-wings

Writer

15 years ago

Aww, very glad to hear that. Heehee

ShadowyRedWolfy ~shadowpack123

Photographer

15 years ago

Your welcome ^^

Noxine ~noxine

Watcher

15 years ago

I love that this is grate

Noxine ~noxine

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15 years ago

I try to upload my poem and I non stop get that error

File type dissallowed.
This file type may be the wrong format for the submission type you are trying to make,
or is simply a file type that is not allowed at all.
Click the link below to review the submission you are trying to make.

and I tray on .txt .doc and so on and the file is under 10mb

ShadowyRedWolfy ~shadowpack123

Photographer

15 years ago

Try to save as a rich text file (rtf.) Then upload the rich text and see if that works

Noxine ~noxine

Watcher

15 years ago

kk thx

Kyriann ~kyriann

Art Whore

15 years ago

Nicely written! If I may suggest something though, Try to work on rhythm a little bit, the stanzas on their own rhythm, but I would suggest trying to improve the rhythm of the general piece, there are some parts, though descriptive, that are very choppy. With a normal story, it's not as much of an issue, but when telling a story within a poem, you have to make sure that even if it doesn't rhyme, it's important to still keep the rhythm going! :D still nicely done though! You have done what many poets struggle to do, create imagery, its easy to tell what is happening, but you take it a step further and actually SHOW the reader what is happening.

So there ya go, that's my little critique for ya! hahaha ^^ hope it was helpful in some way! :D

Faolan_Wolf-Wings ~faolanwolf-wings

Writer

15 years ago

In fact, it probably is! I can't really do anything about the rhythm part, but your positive comments spurred an urge to make more poems and stories. Ironicly, I did not know how I created imagery in this poem. Even if I did, I never really paid much attention to it or really thought about the strugles faced by most poets. I am only a novice poet though. +Watch me for more poems and stories in the future!

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