Mmm. The way the hand around the hose looks is a little too tight. It kinda looks like he's making a fist. It should be a bit more open, I think, since he's holding a cylindrical object.
Also, that toe on the left foot that's out? It looks like in comparison to the others, it'd be really short, if you uncurled all the other toes as well, I mean. May want to just go ahead and curl that one, too.
Question: He's not usually this big, right? I'd make a point about how you should be able to see a bit of his hips and legs, but if his stomach is larger than usual in this, than what you have here makes sense.
Otherwise, this is pretty darn cute. I love the expression you gave him, and that paw around the stomach. I also like the detail you added on the stomach there, where his foot is pressing against it, how the fold is being pushed back. All in all, I'm really interested to see where this goes.

YEE! I love you!
But yeah he's much larger than normal. I plan it to be a picture of all 3 of my 'sonas. Bear and tiger like oogling over Drake. And yeah, I'll have to go back and fix the toes and hand (curse traditional!) But ty very much! I really appreciate someone that took the time to critique and I'm glad you like it! <3

Heheh, it's no problem at all. :3 I look forward to seeing the finished product.

So am I! Again, thank you for being someone to actually give me good critique.

sweet job man looks soo nice

ty! glad you like it! It was actually very irritating getting it done after I got the lower body.. I'm surprised that the feet, stomach, and side hand were really easy.

thats no problem for you man ^^

Love it :3

Looks pretty good, Drake. All the quirks I had Broken said. The only quirk I do have, though, is with the right arm. It seems like you're trying to show the great fulness of the belly, but even with that much fat to rest on, it seems to be bending inward. Now, that's a doable move, but I don't think it shows the relaxed state he's in. What I would recommend is to show a bit more of that arm, or bend it more outward, to make the shep seem more relaxes.

Other than that, you have really improved. Great job!

Cool beans man! Thanks and glad you like! :3

And arm fixed!

Looks much better!

D'awwwwwwww, adorable shep. Wants to glomp him :D

he never minds hugs and occasional foods.

:D *hugs the big shep and gives him steak*