Quite an aggressive lady, but also pretty understandable! I liked the emotions that were chosen for her, and I liked how the dialogue went about with its unique explanation and description! A nice read, great work!

Yeah, she doesn't really like being told 'no'. I do appreciate how you thought I managed her emotion throughout well enough; still a bit iffy on trying to write more assertive and forceful characters as I'm not an especially assertive or forceful person.

Thank you much for reading, very much appreciated.

Sorry you were having a rough time with it! I enjoyed it, good emotions, and I can see why the prisoner in question preferred exile lol.

Mostly just a bit frustrated because I could have simply reposted my submission for last week! It would have fit just as well for this prompt I feel. I did have a few other ideas but mostly went through them thinking to myself "A is boring, B is cringe-inducing, C is... no".

Despite my own personal frustrations with this one, it does mean a lot you would take the time to read through this one. Thanks much for that.

I had a similar issue, my friend. Don't feel alone; besides the story was okay, but if you feel otherwise, that's fine. Just take care, and keep looking on the outcome of better days.

Perhaps next week's prompt will pave the way for something more interesting. Nevertheless, thanks much for going through it, very grateful for that.

Amen.

My first guess, reading her lose her temper, was that the woman loved the prisoner that is willing to be exiled.

Oh, good, I was genuinely worried that maybe I got a bit off track with that, so I'm glad you managed to pick up on it. Yes, the woman was indeed more than just acquaintances with the prisoner.

Thanks much for looking through this one, much appreciated.

Reminds me that I need to keep reading that series when I have a chances. The few glimpses I've seen of her does make her seem like a rather interesting character.

I thought it was well done, even if you particularly didn't like it yourself. Here's to next week being better.

You know I appreciate it, but that I'm also going to say you don't have to go through that mess if you don't have the time / don't want to. I am glad to hear that you seemed to think that the woman featured here was built up interestingly enough.

Well, they can't all be gems, but I am very grateful you'd look it over nonetheless. Thanks much for that.

it's good that he chose exile... I would have too...

Vix

Forsaken by the kingdom, but at least free from his shackles, I suppose.

Thanks much for reading this one, always much appreciated.

Ah well, at least you are writing kind of no matter what, while for example I don't write stuff at all. I actually envy you that commitment to it. >_<

And I liked that story! It felt funny to me. I thought that prisoners there were executed, but being exiled is a nice option. I would choose that myself like Vixyy, lol.

It made me imagine a wacky world where a lot of people are executed for little things and a person who holds all power there is that sort of character like here, haha. It could be something like spymaster getting to be executed for his mistake, and then his successor being executed next for something small too and like that endlessly. xD I don't know why it makes me think about executions if it was about exile in your story.

Good luck with further writing and let's pray to the AI of the prompt that it won't be again something that this story would be more fitting for, like prompt "rage" or something, lol.

Well, nothing I write up is really ever that interesting, but I do enjoy it all the same. Perhaps you will join in when you have the time; your stories are always a treat.

I am glad to hear you thought this one went over well enough. I would probably prefer exile over being locked in a cell as well, if I'm honest.

Well, one would not really expect prisoners of characters like these to be shown mercy of any kind. Probably best not to upset the people in power in such a world.

I'm just saying this now: if the next prompt is "rage", "anger", "frustrated", or some variation of the sort, I'm going to start thinking that you, Vixyy, and the word generator are all pranking me!
(Thank you much for having taken the time to read, very grateful for that.)

Well, whatever you think about this one, it turned out to be awesome in my eyes, and as we know, lookers on see most of the game, so don't try to deny it. And I agree with Silent Beast, the first thought I got from her reaction was she just was in love with this prisoner so she couldn't believe what he said and did according to the spy master's words.

And again, awesome work just like all other your works^^

I do very much appreciate you would say you thought this one went well, I myself just don't think much of this one.

I'm grateful you'd look this one over, thanks much for that.