Your doing pretty well with this, better then most who handle topics like this, with immaturity. However, if I may, their is some advices that may prove useful to you, I think that the panels, of the Salsut, are well controlled and well done, but having him stoic and recounting his tale immediatley, undermines the previous history of this character, that personally I think has more weight and emotion, then the banishment of his brother.

I know he's trying to relate, you did got that across, but if you wanted to show how much compassion, that's fitting for a benelvomence of a god, then he should be more empathic, should be more involved in their pain and finally should express it honestly and not reserve.

However, this is merely advices to a friend, perhaps you would like to tell us, your thought process in making this wonderful comic, starting with this page of course?

Thanks for the advice!

I suppose Salsut's (and my) reasoning for talking about his brother is to let the man know that he does have a pretty good idea of what its like to lose someone to the gods. And when he had no ability to kill them. To let the man know that he also hates the gods. Salsut's stoicism is moreso for himself instead of Ronoa (the guy). Salsut does not want to have his emotions obscure his tact. He wants to appear powerful and capable as a leader but the tears in his eyes also indicate a man who is not just empathetic but also quite soft hearted. He's trying to not look weak in his eyes.

By not attacking Ronoa or belittling him and even showing compassion to his tale, he is already demonstrating that Ronoa is wrong about him. He is not like Neyros. He feels for the man. He can relate to him. There is a connection between Ronoa and Salsut. And for Ronoa to know that might mean he will be a bit more docile and even accepting of someone who knows the pain he is in.

Ah! I see, my friend. I'm now enlighten. Forgive my ingnorance, but is the Salsut, a young god? I get that because he's with a primitive tribe, with basic principals. However, not to belittle this explosive well crafted of agony and intimacy but I was , curious if you had thought of any alternatives?

Because, if he was a wise god, he wouldn't be sitting int he throne room, the literal spot, where that murderious devil, seated? Spark instant resenment for those that have still have burning hate in their hearts.

Also, it would be a good idea, to start having links to your pages. Make it easier for us to follow your delightfully wonderful stories, friend.

I should definitely do that.

And no, Salsut is not a God. He's a mortal that has found a power that allows him to become strong enough to kill them.

Thank you, for accepting the advice.

Ah I see, well that may be a mortal man, but to primitives, might as well be.

They do think he's a God. He's about to correct them.

What do you think, will happen later down the line, after he tells them?

Well I personally think that it will cause them to trust him moreso than not.

His plans are about to be set. And he will begin to lay them out.

Ah I see, so their won't be any resistence or conspiracies? I only ask, because with my limited knowledge of historical empires, normally if someone is in powered and people fear or paranoid, would try to assassinate them. I mean, I think you did show how openly, someone would try to kill him, so that's what I was thinking because of it.

Not to disuade from your plot, just merely asking as a curious friend. :3

I think I get what you mean but this also shows that they cant... or at least that they have not found one yet. But most of them are going to start trusting him as he keeps surprising them with his kindness.

It's important to remember where you came from... <nod nod>

Especially for someone like him. Most of the things he's familiar with are now memories.

ahh