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A small Butterfly/Faerie dragoness decides to bake a cake, but she encounters a problem with her prize winning recipe! Whatever shall she do?
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Please don't berate me for this. this was a small gift to
OrangeDragoness based upon her beautiful cookie baking picture... it was supposed to be a story, but I decided to try my hand a poem... I think I got the rhythm a little better, and the rhymes are slightly less broken; Over all, it's not bad, In my opinion. I hope you like it, and I really would appreciate comments on any issues or errors (or good things too!)
Dragoness (C) OrangeDragoness
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Please don't berate me for this. this was a small gift to
OrangeDragoness based upon her beautiful cookie baking picture... it was supposed to be a story, but I decided to try my hand a poem... I think I got the rhythm a little better, and the rhymes are slightly less broken; Over all, it's not bad, In my opinion. I hope you like it, and I really would appreciate comments on any issues or errors (or good things too!)Dragoness (C)
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Category Poetry / Fantasy
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well, Ever seen the "Colber Report?" When "-ort" is said with a French inflection, it sounds like "ore"... so it was a slant rhyme... sorta...
But I'm glad you liked it! positive feedback is always loved... especially when I thought that I completely blew something. XD
But I'm glad you liked it! positive feedback is always loved... especially when I thought that I completely blew something. XD
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