Thursday Prompt - Journal (365 words challenge!)
A wanderer finds a journal in a mage's tower. It has entertaining content, as one could expect from this sort of a powerful wizard.
The story is fully made in a way to fit the 365 words format. I like it quite a lot, because writing less is easier to me than writing more, lol.
Anyway, thanks for clicking on it and being here right now! I hope it will be/was fun to read. ^^
The story is fully made in a way to fit the 365 words format. I like it quite a lot, because writing less is easier to me than writing more, lol.
Anyway, thanks for clicking on it and being here right now! I hope it will be/was fun to read. ^^
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 96px
File Size 67.1 kB
Krótkie, ale treściwe. Bardzo podoba mi się ta myśl, że różnica między "ideą" zamknięta w nieruchomej książce a życiem i jego ograniczeniami jest w zasadzie tylko różnicą skali. Nawiasem mówiąc, ciekawe, że postawiłeś sobie za limit liczbę słów równą liczbie dni w roku. Cykl roczny, ciągłe powracanie czasu, to w zasadzie kolejny limit i kolejna pułapka demiurga... ; )
Dzięki. I hahaha, niestety muszę Ci powiedzieć że ten limit to kwestia tego promptu, a nie mój pomysł. Tutaj jest do tego link: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/55464297/
Ale wow, to interesująca myśl z tym limitem w formie cyklu rocznego. To prawda. Podczas pisania przyszła mi też na myśl idea wiecznego powrotu jak u Nietzschego.
Dziękuję jeszcze raz za przeczytanie i podzielenie się swoimi myślami. ^^ Poza tym jeśli chcesz to możesz zawsze też dołączyć do tego promptu. W moim przypadku to mnie motywuje do pisania.
Ale wow, to interesująca myśl z tym limitem w formie cyklu rocznego. To prawda. Podczas pisania przyszła mi też na myśl idea wiecznego powrotu jak u Nietzschego.
Dziękuję jeszcze raz za przeczytanie i podzielenie się swoimi myślami. ^^ Poza tym jeśli chcesz to możesz zawsze też dołączyć do tego promptu. W moim przypadku to mnie motywuje do pisania.
Eh, no cóż, nie zauważyłem tego "prompt" w tytule i stąd moja nadinterpretacja. xd
Prawdę mówiąc, nie bardzo mnie pociąga myśl pisania czegoś na limit słów (zawsze było to moją zmorą w czasach szkolnych by zmieścić się w limicie), ale w sumie taki rygor może być całkiem dobrym ćwiczeniem, więc pomyślę, może kiedyś dołączę
Prawdę mówiąc, nie bardzo mnie pociąga myśl pisania czegoś na limit słów (zawsze było to moją zmorą w czasach szkolnych by zmieścić się w limicie), ale w sumie taki rygor może być całkiem dobrym ćwiczeniem, więc pomyślę, może kiedyś dołączę
Wow, that's a high praise. Thank you then. I admit that I prefer writing very short stories that I can plan entirely in my mind. The more words I have to write the worse I feel about it. But I want to work on that, haha.
Oh, and thanks a lot for the fave. ^^ I think you have that kind of skill. Think about your poems that are short, but contain real content within. Like the one about the blind rabbit.
Oh, and thanks a lot for the fave. ^^ I think you have that kind of skill. Think about your poems that are short, but contain real content within. Like the one about the blind rabbit.
Thanks! Well, I could buy you a new pen in that case. xD And I understand the desire to write the book of your life yourself, it makes me think of ideas like Nietzschean Übermensch and so on. Also very nice to have you read the story and comment and so on! You were the first commenter I ever got, lol.
Now we just have to hunt down the author and get them to make some modifications.
As a side note. I actually did something like that in one of my tabletop games where the player got trapped in a book and tracked down the author within the book in order to escape their predicament.
As a side note. I actually did something like that in one of my tabletop games where the player got trapped in a book and tracked down the author within the book in order to escape their predicament.
Yeah, it's a common sentiment. Tonin wanted to complain to them, haha. And I think this kind of thing is a fun idea. I have a sort of stupid affinity for trying to play with narration and world in the story, to the point of me thinking that these stories I posted here are a little bit too similar to each other.
Thanks for reading and commenting! This one has so many faves and comments; the most of any of these stories of mine so far! Very flattering considering the fact that I'm not some sort of writer or anything, but a dumb fox who writes on a whim.
Thanks for reading and commenting! This one has so many faves and comments; the most of any of these stories of mine so far! Very flattering considering the fact that I'm not some sort of writer or anything, but a dumb fox who writes on a whim.
I think that's fine if you keep exploring the same themes. I mean I do that a ton with my own works. Like when I compiled my massive list of all of my settings it really felt like I kept coming back to the same themes over and over, just with different variations and takes on it.
Very lovely. I wasn't expecting a story about a journal to include a reference to the Demiurge, but I appreciate your philosophical thinking!
I've never really believed in complete free will or absolute determinism. As the old saying/prayer goes: "Give me the serenity to accept what cannot be changed, the courage to change what can be changed, and the wisdom to know the one from the other."
I've never really believed in complete free will or absolute determinism. As the old saying/prayer goes: "Give me the serenity to accept what cannot be changed, the courage to change what can be changed, and the wisdom to know the one from the other."
Thank you. ^^ And I think that Demiurge is a very fun concept fitting for fantasy. Otherwise if I were to believe in God, it would be probably rather the Demiurge and not a benevolent creator. But in a way christian God fits into that definition without you having to believe in something else, but interpreting this stuff differently. Just like people can be either determinists or believe in free will, still being a Christian. There are a lot of denominations. If I were to adopt some sort of christian worldview, it would be some combination of calvinism and gnosticism, lol. Maybe something like that exists actually.
And I understand your thinking on the free will! I remember that in my case I couldn't understand how I could not believe in free will of some sort, because when I tried to adopt that thinking it felt like I can't do anything, like there is no room for any will at all and I am paralyzed. But it isn't really a matter of whether we have will and our experience of it is meaningful and real and so on, but what is the nature of the will. I don't know how I could believe in free will of any sort without specific metaphysical beliefs that would lead to that conclusion, like cartesian dualism. Without these, how could free will even exist and what would it be? Brain is composed of matter and matter is nature, and nature is governed by the processes within it. What would enact its will on the matter? Matter isn't controlled by a will, but by physical, chemical forces. Or at least it's a naturalistic perspective, but if I adopt it without something more to it, where even is room for any free will? That would be my explanation of it, haha.
And thank you for reading! I appreciate it. And even faving! 12 faves is soo much.
And I understand your thinking on the free will! I remember that in my case I couldn't understand how I could not believe in free will of some sort, because when I tried to adopt that thinking it felt like I can't do anything, like there is no room for any will at all and I am paralyzed. But it isn't really a matter of whether we have will and our experience of it is meaningful and real and so on, but what is the nature of the will. I don't know how I could believe in free will of any sort without specific metaphysical beliefs that would lead to that conclusion, like cartesian dualism. Without these, how could free will even exist and what would it be? Brain is composed of matter and matter is nature, and nature is governed by the processes within it. What would enact its will on the matter? Matter isn't controlled by a will, but by physical, chemical forces. Or at least it's a naturalistic perspective, but if I adopt it without something more to it, where even is room for any free will? That would be my explanation of it, haha.
And thank you for reading! I appreciate it. And even faving! 12 faves is soo much.
"Brain is composed of matter and matter is nature, and nature is governed by the processes within it. What would enact its will on the matter? Matter isn't controlled by a will, but by physical, chemical forces"
There's a thought experiment I've heard before. Say someone builds a ultra-futuristic supercomputer that's extremely good at predicting natural processes. It can predict the behavior of atoms and molecules so well that it effectively knows the future of every human based solely on matter. The computer's predictions would be 100% accurate for those that didn't know about them. But, if I read a report from the computer that says I'm going to die in a car crash on X Day at X Time, then I can avoid that fate by simply making sure I'm not in a car at that time. I've defeated what Nature and physics said was going to happen to me.
Now this scenario is all very sci-fi, very "Minority Report". But the point is that, from a materialist perspective, we maybe have some free will on account of the fact we have a consciousness that can contemplate and try to predict the future. We then take steps to avoid the futures we deem bad. However, this all depends on how you define "consciousness" and "free will". And both the computer and our consciousness use natural processes themselves, so what are we to make of that?
"12 faves is soo much." Hey, people like thinking about this stuff!
There's a thought experiment I've heard before. Say someone builds a ultra-futuristic supercomputer that's extremely good at predicting natural processes. It can predict the behavior of atoms and molecules so well that it effectively knows the future of every human based solely on matter. The computer's predictions would be 100% accurate for those that didn't know about them. But, if I read a report from the computer that says I'm going to die in a car crash on X Day at X Time, then I can avoid that fate by simply making sure I'm not in a car at that time. I've defeated what Nature and physics said was going to happen to me.
Now this scenario is all very sci-fi, very "Minority Report". But the point is that, from a materialist perspective, we maybe have some free will on account of the fact we have a consciousness that can contemplate and try to predict the future. We then take steps to avoid the futures we deem bad. However, this all depends on how you define "consciousness" and "free will". And both the computer and our consciousness use natural processes themselves, so what are we to make of that?
"12 faves is soo much." Hey, people like thinking about this stuff!
Oh thank you. ^^ I see that you are reading through my stuff again. :p Thanks for that. And maybe you won't even be told that story, because only the author of it would be able to experience it that way. Humans are like characters in a book who experience only their certain part and can have problems with understanding things outside of that.
I wish you fun with The Book Of Life in any case. I can't think of a name for my own story so far. o.O
I wish you fun with The Book Of Life in any case. I can't think of a name for my own story so far. o.O
Hehe, no problem; still got more to go through.
No, I'm pretty sure I will be told to of it.
The other part about humans I certainly agree with.
Thank you, and here's hoping you find a name for it in due time.
No, I'm pretty sure I will be told to of it.
The other part about humans I certainly agree with.
Thank you, and here's hoping you find a name for it in due time.
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